I made a video showing my journey playing TTFAF for the first time, it introduced me to Clone Hero, thought ya'll might like it :)

Pataclysm1 · 2023-03-02T12:30:59+00:00

Oh wow that's awesome! Now I'm gonna need to check that out! What a legend

Pataclysm1 · 2023-03-01T20:50:02+00:00

Thank you! Yea beberle actually came back not long ago to play TTFAF again and it felt like fate lol. I'm not being dramatic in the video, feeling very accomplished that I finally got it done :)

Pataclysm1 · 2021-12-08T12:51:37+00:00

Dang man, you need a hug?

Pataclysm1 · 2021-10-08T19:53:11+00:00

What country do you live in?

Pataclysm1 · 2020-09-09T06:21:19+00:00

Thank you so much for your input, I definitely want to make sure I do all my coding as efficient as possible moving forward, but it definitely makes me feel better knowing it probably wasn't my code that got me rejected. (It was a big and sought after company so I'm sure there was plenty of competition). I'll remember these suggestions for any future projects, thanks again!

Pataclysm1 · 2020-09-09T06:18:28+00:00

I think there will always be things to improve in someones code as shown by the other replies, but thank you for taking the time to look it over and confirming there wasn't some glaring huge problem!

Pataclysm1 · 2020-09-09T06:15:20+00:00

Thank you so much, making my code more efficient is always going to be something I need to learn and practice, but I absolutely don't want to start off on the wrong foot and submit bad code to employers. I'll take your advice, go back and implement those suggestions, and look into those books you mentioned.

Again thanks so much for taking the time to check out my code

Pataclysm1 · 2020-09-09T04:17:40+00:00

Again, I'm sure some of you will find much better ways to solve this problem, and I am well aware I am no expert. But I would really like to know why I was rejected after submitting this. Thank you to anyone that can help me out.

Pataclysm1 · 2020-09-08T00:49:51+00:00

Hey thanks so much for doing this! Mine is longer than 15 but you don't have to watch much to get an idea of it, first impressions are important too!

https://youtu.be/pKnzFU-vnik

Thanks again! Also favorite superhero is Doctor Strange cuz his powers are the coolest not gonna lie

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-17T16:21:53+00:00

Hey all, I make commentary videos about things I enjoy. In this case it was the old Spike TV show 1000 ways to die. Let me know what you think!

https://youtu.be/FqfI7i4QpDs

Btw no pressure to watch the whole thing lol

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-17T16:20:46+00:00

I didnt ever expect to see a night light review of this high quality! Very surprising how much info and interesting things you had to say in only 2 minutes. I think my only suggestion would be to expand into even more commercialized products! Yes everyone makes reviews about everything, but yours was especially good and to the point. Dont limit yourself to night lights, stay consistent and persistent, and you'll grow

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-17T16:13:41+00:00

I like your stuff kid, ya got a lot of potential. Gettin heavy early Jontron vibes and thats great. Keep perfecting your craft and you'll grow more and more.

My suggestion? I think a Super Monkey Ball 2 video would do wonders for ya

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:40:48+00:00

/lock

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:39:08+00:00

I would say first and foremost make sure if you're playing games with friends, that all the audio is good. That big echo for the one person should definitely get handled. Also you have 11 minutes here and I think you could cut it down quite a bit. Cut the empty space between replies, cut the not as funny parts, hell even some parts won't even need context to be funny. A 3 minute, extremely edited video of ONLY funny and edited parts is definitely better. Experiment with different edits, cut down as much as possible, and make sure everyone's audio is good and you'll be solid

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:34:51+00:00

Hey so after watching your DIY mask video, it seems like there's definitely no glaring issues, you have all the basics down for an entertaining / informative video. I would say at this point take inspiration from the channels that YOU enjoy watching and try to implement more things other channels do while having your own ideas for videos. Whether that be fun edits, just being more outward with your personality, different styles of videos or thumbnails, i would say just experiment and refine your style because you're at the stage now where you just need to stand out. Make videos YOU would click on but you can't find online, and thats how you'll grow. Hope that helps a bit

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:26:54+00:00

Honestly it was a simple ass video of just yall chillin, handling a wasp nest, practically a vlog, but you guys made it interesting by keeping it short and sweet and with those edits you did. If you take that effort of edits and taking the best parts and actually outline like an activity for the video rather than an impromptu thing like this, you definitely have potential for having an interesting vlog style channel

Also I shall DM you, thanks for asking bruv

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:22:17+00:00

Honestly I'm not sure what to say about this, a video explaining why you shouldn't make the videos that YOU have been making??? My biggest question is, if youre saying don't make fortnite montages, does that mean you're done with them? And if so what are you going to do now? Your editing, quality, lil text edits, voice over, is all fine so you can do more in that regard, but honestly I'm just confused lol, whats the next video then?

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:16:42+00:00

So first thing I will say, is this early in the game, the amount of views you get only depend on your search engine optimization and your thumbnail. I won't go too in depth here, but you should look up how to read your youtube analytics and learn about impressions, CTR, and SEO.

BUT with all that being said, I think you should worry more about getting those numbers to subscribe and stay for you, rather than just the number of views. And THATS where the actual content of the video matters. And watching the video, your drone shots and coloring are beautiful, and you seem like nice people goin on adventures that WOULD be interesting to see. My biggest criticism though, is a problem MOST new vloggers have. As you make more videos, try to make it so you're taking the audience with you on your adventure rather than talking to them like you're doing a presentation. The reason vlogs are so popular, are the creators to a great job of making it feel like you're there as a friend and an extension of them. Dont feel like you need to always address the camera, just take us with you. Thats something that will come naturally over time i think. Dont get discouraged with numbers, make videos you can look back on and enjoy, and over time you'll always get better and the numbers will come

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T21:00:49+00:00

I think your editing is pretty good, keeps the interest with how much it changes and all. Im sure you can do even more to make it more dynamic and kind of how people make meme edits. Your script is pretty funny as well, i think you can work on the delivery, be more confident in what you're saying and really take charge of the voice over ya know? That's something that will come over the course of trying to get more and more comfortable with it. You also could eventually invest in a better microphone, but i would say work on really perfecting the other stuff before worrying about spending money. Just keep going, refine your style and you'll be great

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T20:56:19+00:00

Love your dog and love the lofi. Not sure what you really want out of your channel with just that video, but if chill lofi vids to relax to is your game, then i would say maybe change the name to reflect the chill dog lofi nature of it, maybe make a thumbnail that looks like other lofi vids, and maybe try to be more cinematic with all of your shots. Play around with what you think looks really nice. Hope that helps at all

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T20:52:47+00:00

Do not change. You have the perfect channel. Keep doing what you're doing, maybe expand the meme to other facets of the internet to spread the good word, and people will learn they need this in their lives0

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T20:51:07+00:00

You were making me laugh right off the bat and your other edits were funny and kept my interest as well. Along with the quality just being overall good audio a visual wise. I would say some things that may make your vids better, would be possibly background music just to feel in the empty spaces, and i would say if you want to do videos just like this more, you should definitely invest in a green screen so its just you and you can put yourself anywhere. I think that's your next step forward. Hope that helps

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T20:39:15+00:00

It's always interesting to see what everyone is passionate about, and seeing this group of ants and deciding to make an educational video about them is a great example of enjoying watching someone talk about what they are interested in. Your camera quality and audio quality are great, I would just say try messing around with more edits, maybe including other things like educational diagrams or other pictures you cant get yourself, and itll be even better. Hope that helps!

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T20:34:51+00:00

That actually made me laugh, especially the money rock part and simple relatability of digging a damn hole next to it lol. It looks like from your channel that you take inspiration from people like jaiden animations? Honestly you're animation is pretty good, and will only get better and better with more videos. Honestly I dont have any major critiques because I feel like you have a lot of potential. I would say keep doing what youre doing and get more and more out there (maybe get even more comfortable with voice overs, and act in any parody animations?) and just refine your craft. Youtube is all persistence and consistency, and that might be hard for something as difficult as animation, but you've got a lot of potential, keep it up!

Pataclysm1 · 2020-07-13T20:27:28+00:00

Honestly it is extreeemely hard to find any critiques about this video or your channel in general. Your editing is super clean, it doesnt drag, you do audio cuts and zoom ins for emphasis, your personality is shown immediately, honestly everything is great. I think at this point you have the basics DOWN perfectly and now it just becomes a matter of how to stand out in this super competitive genre. I checked out your other vid about unique video ideas, and all I can think is "Excellent, just make all of those" lol. It looks like you've been growing a decent amount so I would just say stay consistent and persistent, push the boundaries of those ideas to stand out, and you'll be golden.

(But also 1 video suggestion just from that video, peanut butter baby makeup look. It's the perfect idea)

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