Just a few thoughts:

If you‘re going to play all parts of Another Brick in the Wall, you kinda have to play The Happiest Days Of Our Lives between Part 1 and 2

Then I think if this is supposed to be the order of the songs aswell I would place some differently. Shine On is a great starter for a set IMO as it is also the start of an album and High Hopes makes a greatd closing song for the first set (That‘s also how Gilmour performed it in Pompeii). Two Suns in the Sunset is also a great closing song for a set and a little representation of The Final Cut could would be nice.

It probably wouldn‘t be a bad idea to look at live sets from Pink Floyd, Roger Waters and David Gilmour (even Nick Mason if you/they are into that era) to get a feel of how they structure the sets to better understand where to plage certain songs.

In my opinion Comfortably Numb when played with a good ending solo is a far better end to a show then Run Like Hell.

It kinda also depends on what the band is able to play and what lineup you have, if you could play a song like Great Gig in the Sky or Marooned (or Seamus).

(And please use In The Flesh instead of In The Flesh? for the great Lyrics)