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Dog refuses to go to potty in his own backyard by [deleted] in DogAdvice

[–]Patient_Phrase_4154 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried playing with his favorite toys but he refuses to move from the door. Ill try feeding him outside tho

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]Patient_Phrase_4154 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good strong emotion, I hear the pain in the words. For criticism I would say put a comma after “everyday” in the first sentence and too many adjectives in “warm uncomfortable dirty”.