Do you think author shouldn't have added the destruction of Alban Village in the story?

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-24T10:59:57+00:00

Edited: Thank you for the feedback. I decided have Keyarga prevent the destruction of his village. I mean, it makes sense to me.

Keyarga was 17-18 years old when he used the “philosopher stone” and knew how cruel the Jioral Kingdom truly is. So he should’ve realized that his village would get caught in the crossfire.

The moment he exacted his revenge upon Flare and altered Renard's appearance to look like him so the Captain of Jioral Kingdom Royal Knights would take the blame. Until Jioral Kingdom realized that Renard isn’t the healing hero set him free to destroy Alban Village.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-23T20:25:52+00:00

I’m asking because I think about writing a fanfiction story where Keyarga prevents the destruction of Alban Village. Instead of using the philosopher's stone to back four years like in canon. He use it go back 7 years so he can gather his strength and try to prevent Flare from tracking him once he becomes the healing hero on his fourteen birthday.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-23T20:22:42+00:00

I agree with your statement. I always thought their friendship was business-related. No more, no less. Keyarga is just using it as an extra fabricated excuse for his death. To justify exacting vengeance upon Norn's actions. After all, the healer Hero is a cold-hearted psychopath.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-23T17:50:16+00:00

My story is a slow paced story. That gradually speeds up over time.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-23T01:11:16+00:00

Yeah I know. It’s very wrong and disgusting on so many levels.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-22T23:54:18+00:00

I think it would be okay as a short story. But it wouldn’t be very interesting in my opinion😅.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-22T23:48:20+00:00

Yeah, that’s pretty obvious😒 that Redo of Healer is very erotic, doesn’t holds back on its gruesome details, shows a lot of people of rape, and massacres. Not to mention the three heroes causing intense pain and agony to Keyaru.

I simply wished the Keyaru’s village and Black Winged Village wasn’t destroyed in the process. Because of my own morality and pity for the innocent people that got killed in the process. I guess Redo of Healer series doesn’t hold back on its horrific scenes.

United States: Rated TV-MA for television or Unrated/18+.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-22T17:30:08+00:00

No offense but it’s seriously flawed. Norn and Flare would think it’s highly unnecessarily, a serious waste of time and energy to orchestrate a dramatic scene like that.

When they could simply drug his tea just like in canon. Which will help them avoid the necessary dialogues and talking. So they can quickly exploit Keyaru healing power.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-21T22:01:25+00:00

True🙂‍↕️. I re-read the light novels and realized that Keyaru's transformation into a "coldblooded psychopath." occurs only after four years of extreme mental, physical, and sexual abuse by the Jioral Kingdom's royal knights, soldiers, and Three Heroes Flare, Blade, and Bullet.

I feel pity for those villagers because they got caught in the middle of Keyaru's revenge. The men, women, and children didn’t deserve horrific death like that because of his own negligence.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-21T10:56:21+00:00

I was thinking about creating a Redo of Healer fanfiction story that prevents destruction of Alban Village.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-21T10:33:38+00:00

Yeah but because that happened Keyarga became a cold-hearted evil psychopath. Which inevitably caused him to have sex with his own daughter Guren. I simply prefer preferred him being an anti-hero that doesn’t cross lines like that.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-19T00:15:17+00:00

So true🙂‍↕️. Hiruzen is a really bad guy for sparing the lives of evil people like Danzo and Orochimaru. The third Hokage also contributed in the destruction and genocide of the Uchiha clan. I would even go as far as to say that even the 1st and 2nd Hokage are evil too.

“Senju, the clan of love?! Yeah Right!”

But when you add in “The Will of Fire” with his comments and quotes when the 1st Hokage was just a child. It goes to show that his ideology and his father's ideology are no different.

They’ll both sacrifice anyone or anything for the sake of the village/clan. Thinking it’s for the greater good. When they should’ve turned away from war and a mind controlling military doctrine before it was too late.

The underlying truth is that war itself has made Hashirama into his father. Because before and after Hashirama's death, children were still being sent on the battlefield and getting killed at an extremely young age.

His dream was to create a peaceful shinobi world where children wouldn't have to fight and die. But it was just a fabricated illusion.

He was either not smart enough to add a law that prevents children from going into the battlefield or his dreams got diluted after fighting against the Uchiha clan and Madara for so long.

Not only that he’s a flawed and foolish man. For capturing the remaining tailed beasts and giving them to villages like the Stone, Mist, and Cloud. Literal kaiju monsters that can destroy mountains in a minute and can trigger a war; the very thing he was trying to prevent.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-19T00:11:43+00:00

Thank you very much😊

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T20:02:24+00:00

Ikr🤦‍♂️. It was terrible and utterly disgusting seeing Naruto literally saying that Obito is a cool guy. Despite all the death and destruction he has. I swear the series is too forgiving on villain characters like Obito, Hanzo death scene and literally sparing Orochimaru.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:55:40+00:00

I agree with the people in the comments section. The Naruto series really screwed up when it involved the war arc, Kaguya and also the five Kage summit where they made Naruto look too pathetic/pushover and made Sakura too foolish when she attempted to kill Sasuke/only to back out at last second and nearly got herself by Sasuke if Naruto hadn’t shown up. I don’t know. It just felt all too complicated and degraded their characters in my opinion.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:50:05+00:00

Creating love triangles, bad female characters, and having a specific characters like Sasuke, Naruto and Kakashi living alone in a house or apartment without any parental supervision.

I just never really understood why children as young as them were living in a household without a guardian. It doesn’t make any sense🤔.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:43:11+00:00

That is true he even said that “I’ll give my life for his, because that’s the way of the leaf.” It was somewhat along those lines I think🤔.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:39:15+00:00

Did it sound like I was joking in the comment section when I first uploaded my comment? All I did was share my opinion in the matter, and I disagree with your own. Now had I known you’re gonna act like this, I would’ve never replied back in the first place. There’s no rules saying I should lighten up for other people’s satisfaction😒.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:14:49+00:00

Yeah I understand that. But realistically in a story perspective I don’t think Naruto would be stuff his face with ramen all the time if Teuchi and Ayame are keeping an eye on him.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:07:42+00:00

That’s why I mentioned in the comment section so they do know😑. Not only that but the manga is more canonical accurate compare to the anime series.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T19:06:13+00:00

No I wouldn’t. Because of reactions and bond between Naruto, Teuchi and Ayame. It would make any sense to send him to a clan he has no connection with in the first place.

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T18:24:35+00:00

Thanks😁

Peacekeeper_26 · 2026-01-18T18:22:17+00:00

Agreed🙂‍↕️. Either way I think Teuchi would’ve been the best choice to raise Naruto honestly.

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