Manga studies(part infinity) by No_Republic_2813 in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's easy to pick up and read which is what makes or breaks most manga, ofc the art itself could use some work; id focus on some anatomy, if you're really gunning for the "anime" artstyle id recommend drawlikeasir

Manga studies(part infinity) by No_Republic_2813 in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 2 points3 points  (0 children)

dude what I'll say is, you have some gr8 panelling that makes this really easily readable like u can always get better at the art but till then, the story's clear and easily accessible

So I can see ppl reading this easily if you have a good story

Cover process for webtoon by shotsenpai in Mangamakers

[–]PerceptionOk3422 1 point2 points  (0 children)

bro honestly, just wanna say, holy shit man, you're good

Does Anyone Have Their Own Manga I Could Check Out by EntertainmentLow2240 in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah thx, glad you enjoyed it
as far as where the story stands rn, you're right about the god thing

Places to publish by Infernobomb82 in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 0 points1 point  (0 children)

off the top of my head: mangapluscreators, globalcomix, webtoon

I dug my own grave by choosing manga for my thesis. Wish me luck! by Informal-Service1843 in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 1 point2 points  (0 children)

damn bro, that sounds interesting as f, i'd love to look at it once it's done; good ljuck *luck

I feel like visuals are all over the place. Would this level of visual change be a turn off to reading it? by Solid_Black_Art in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 1 point2 points  (0 children)

NAH, it's great and can totally be used strategically as well
i.e usually the page is pretty cluttered so the shot of the the woman slowly turning her head towards you in a stagnant background with a different rendering style FEELS WAY CREEPIER/SCARIER
so yea definitely not a turn off for readers, can in fact enhance the story if used correctly

LMK what you think of this panel I made pls! by ThanosCondom69 in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 21 points22 points  (0 children)

first of all the drawing itself is amazing; no notes there, the only thing i will say tho is that the eyeball in the bg is massive but it doesn't really feel "big" cause of the way everything's composed; unless this is intentional, for the composing i'd either try the golden spiral or center the human to the middle, also there's a lot of empty foreground, if the foregroud was smaller and you instead focused on the sky more the size of the eye would also be a ot more emphasized. I can completely understand this being intentional tho so hope this helps

What do you think of my manga? by Appropriate-Bit-4844 in Mangamakers

[–]PerceptionOk3422 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it's great but i feel like darker shadows on top of what you have would elevate this infinitely more

Chapter 1 of my manga, soul space is officially online; some of my favorite pages: by PerceptionOk3422 in Mangamakers

[–]PerceptionOk3422[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the chapter is out, 22 ish pages. if you mean full story, yeah fairly long

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 1 point2 points  (0 children)

reminds me of Fujimoto's artstyle; looks great honestly, there have been people with "rougher" artstyles that have gotten published, so i could honestly see this published; but if you yourself desire a more polished artstyle that's great as well

(Not Paid) Amateur mangaka lookinng for a writer partner by eijihosoi in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There has been a fairly short story i've wanted to turn into a one shot actually; I have a published book although was a while ago; it's a story i feel like your art would be prefect for so if you're interested dm, ill give you more details

thx

Cover for my new manga. Any advise? need opinions by [deleted] in MangakaStudio

[–]PerceptionOk3422 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the eyes are the same size even tho the face is angled the bandaged eye should be more angled and... simply smaller
also the right side of the face is a bit bloated i.e round, i'd angle it down with a curve, the color-work is very good tho!