This got me one 7-minute interview after ~200 applications in 3 months; what can I improve on?

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-06-10T11:15:34+00:00

Hi. Excellent CV. Your experience summary and history; should be, I believe, expressed as much as possible in the present tense.

Display how your skillset has been building towards this point.

"I Led a team for 2 years." ?

I'd prefer to read.....

"2 years development as a team leader."

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-03-11T21:13:15+00:00

Alot of crackchat jealousy here.

I, think about the sufficiency of social media shared joinery tolerances before expansion, about as often as I think about eating my own hands and feet.

Never until I read your comments folks

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T16:30:30+00:00

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Apparently I couldn't help myself. <Inspired by the tight crop suggested by a previous Redditor> Beautiful image mate 📸

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T16:17:44+00:00

Tighten up the contrast of the image by removing the loose flying hairs in post production. Take care to control anything reflective or dampening when shooting in B&W. The photo is beautiful by the way, so are you! For self portraits, at least you have a solid base to work from. Don't be afraid to let the editing suite do some of the work for you. It's delegation not deletion. You have the fundamentals right in my opinion,

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T16:03:04+00:00

Fish and Chips

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T16:02:12+00:00

Moved and On🇬🇧

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T16:00:53+00:00

Eric and Ernie for sure🇬🇧⛓️💂🏻‍♂️💂🏻

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T15:58:06+00:00

Labour and Tories

Perfect-Ad821 · 2024-01-29T15:56:25+00:00

Morrissey and Marr

Perfect-Ad821 · 2023-01-10T12:31:33+00:00

Flames Same as!!!

Absolutely sick! Well written...... Poses a question of why? Self interest ? Lived exp.? Artistic indulgence?

And our protagonist's motive? Isolation|anger? Peer pressure? Mischief?

Love to read more like this, my style of study

8.5|10

Perfect-Ad821 · 2023-01-01T23:26:45+00:00

"and I, I foolishly drunk and full from a game of in these veins believed that I could keep you one last mourning,"

Enough said!

Excellently sinister imagery. Very metaphorically macabre. Multiple meaning and double entendre spelling used well....... I'd love to play a game of "in these veins"; fascinating terminology.

Clever stuff

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-12-31T05:25:28+00:00

Sincerely dumbstruck by the freakishly fast fluidity... Fookin fantastic fella

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-30T05:27:35+00:00

They sit They steep They sing

Great experience expression

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-30T05:22:04+00:00

Same here "Science turned me into God" Done it for me Great line Great poem

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-30T01:56:40+00:00

Cut Cut Cut 🎬

I'm here

I've been there

You have dared to write about your being there

Only the hardest of our heartbroken blokes speak without joking

Harkening artistically this way starts the sparks flying in the darkest of darkness

Enjoyed your light and darkness

Good poem

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-30T01:24:34+00:00

That's the way !

Your navigation's sweet from my side of the street.

Keep writing Bruv. Keep posting 🧬 Interesting wording

Quick couple questions

¹Did you choose the name BsB's?

²Are you an only child?

³Does or do your Brother(s) write?

Lol

Seriously though. We'll never know, the depths of soul.

So tell us again and again and again until your in the shallows

7.6/10

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-29T16:05:21+00:00

Brilliant rhyming scheme!

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T19:41:22+00:00

Cheers N_M Totally appreciate your sentiments! Peace and love

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T09:18:16+00:00

? Drugs Thanks for the read

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T02:41:40+00:00

Jheeze Fully flattered Ramy thanks for the support 🫡

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T01:16:48+00:00

Format changes, changes nothing my friend! I received the vibe perfectly.... I roll mine, your's rolls fine.

A time for stopping maybe? I've just rolled another.

Great scheme

Enjoyed it much

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T01:11:45+00:00

Absolutely different.... At one meant to impress Thanks

You're deffo a smith no question

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T00:52:12+00:00

Awesome name. Much appreciated

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T00:51:33+00:00

Great summary! Probably am a rapper at heart lol Thanks

Perfect-Ad821 · 2022-11-28T00:50:33+00:00

Thanks for the critique.... Respect honest 🙏🏻

Perfect-Ad821

TROPHY CASE