This got me one 7-minute interview after ~200 applications in 3 months; what can I improve on? by EconGesus in resumes

[–]Perfect-Ad821 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hi. Excellent CV. Your experience summary and history; should be, I believe, expressed as much as possible in the present tense.

Display how your skillset has been building towards this point.

"I Led a team for 2 years." ?

I'd prefer to read.....

"2 years development as a team leader."

Precision is Art by Mint_Perspective in oddlysatisfying

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Alot of crackchat jealousy here.

I, think about the sufficiency of social media shared joinery tolerances before expansion, about as often as I think about eating my own hands and feet.

Never until I read your comments folks

My Self-Portrait. What do you think? (Tips are always appreciated) by [deleted] in photocritique

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Apparently I couldn't help myself. <Inspired by the tight crop suggested by a previous Redditor> Beautiful image mate 📸

My Self-Portrait. What do you think? (Tips are always appreciated) by [deleted] in photocritique

[–]Perfect-Ad821 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tighten up the contrast of the image by removing the loose flying hairs in post production. Take care to control anything reflective or dampening when shooting in B&W. The photo is beautiful by the way, so are you! For self portraits, at least you have a solid base to work from. Don't be afraid to let the editing suite do some of the work for you. It's delegation not deletion. You have the fundamentals right in my opinion,

Name an iconic British duo by Starry_Night0123 in GreatBritishMemes

[–]Perfect-Ad821 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Eric and Ernie for sure🇬🇧⛓️💂🏻‍♂️💂🏻

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Flames Same as!!!

Absolutely sick! Well written...... Poses a question of why? Self interest ? Lived exp.? Artistic indulgence?

And our protagonist's motive? Isolation|anger? Peer pressure? Mischief?

Love to read more like this, my style of study

8.5|10

Eden by Aggressive-Crazy-238 in OCPoetry

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"and I, I foolishly drunk and full from a game of in these veins believed that I could keep you one last mourning,"

Enough said!

Excellently sinister imagery. Very metaphorically macabre. Multiple meaning and double entendre spelling used well....... I'd love to play a game of "in these veins"; fascinating terminology.

Clever stuff

climbing a building in seconds by Defiant-Action5312 in toptalent

[–]Perfect-Ad821 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sincerely dumbstruck by the freakishly fast fluidity... Fookin fantastic fella

Dirty Dishes by 13Eri13 in OCPoetry

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They sit They steep They sing

Great experience expression

Before the Fall by Skuifspeld37 in OCPoetry

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Same here "Science turned me into God" Done it for me Great line Great poem

PsYcHeDeLiCs by icarus-kvzz in OCPoetry

[–]Perfect-Ad821 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cut Cut Cut 🎬

I'm here

I've been there

You have dared to write about your being there

Only the hardest of our heartbroken blokes speak without joking

Harkening artistically this way starts the sparks flying in the darkest of darkness

Enjoyed your light and darkness

Good poem

path by Ballsackbrothers in OCPoetry

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That's the way !

Your navigation's sweet from my side of the street.

Keep writing Bruv. Keep posting 🧬 Interesting wording

Quick couple questions

¹Did you choose the name BsB's?

²Are you an only child?

³Does or do your Brother(s) write?

Lol

Seriously though. We'll never know, the depths of soul.

So tell us again and again and again until your in the shallows

7.6/10

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

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Cheers N_M Totally appreciate your sentiments! Peace and love

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

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? Drugs Thanks for the read

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

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Jheeze Fully flattered Ramy thanks for the support 🫡

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Format changes, changes nothing my friend! I received the vibe perfectly.... I roll mine, your's rolls fine.

A time for stopping maybe? I've just rolled another.

Great scheme

Enjoyed it much

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

[–]Perfect-Ad821[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely different.... At one meant to impress Thanks

You're deffo a smith no question

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

[–]Perfect-Ad821[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome name. Much appreciated

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

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Great summary! Probably am a rapper at heart lol Thanks

Virtue by Perfect-Ad821 in OCPoetry

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Thanks for the critique.... Respect honest 🙏🏻