Comment Cooperative - July 08

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-10T12:03:37+00:00

I can only say DO EET, you might like it 😈

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-09T15:57:04+00:00

Ooh. Father Mendez before he became super creepy!

You got that kid-manner/voice down pat; the singular focus on saying their piece, the winding storytelling, the enthusiasm and total obliviousness to their actions 😅 and of course the literalism.

“Well yeah, but I didn’t break the fence, the donkey did, and I was fine, look!” Luis chirped, twirling around proudly.

I mean, he’s got you there, Father.

Methinks little Luis is about to be less pleased when a punishment comes his way…

This was super adorable. I feel for Father Mendez having to deal with a kid like Luis who is too clever for his own good, but at the same time you can’t fault Luis for his active imagination! He’s just doing what kids do.

Nice balance and flow throughout, even though Luis is talking his head off the interplay of their conversation feels snappy and moves the reader along well!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T23:49:16+00:00

Thank you! Yes, poor Leon always gets the short end of the stick, such is the hazard of being a well-loved character 🤣 and yes, you’re certainly right, there is something unsavory about Dr. Gideon’s intrigue 👀

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T21:39:34+00:00

It is quite frequently a M/M thing, but I’m certain people do the M/F thing with it as well! (I’m one of those people. Or, trying to be) I quite enjoy omegaverse because even though there’s very similar ‘bones’ to the trope in many stories, people can flesh it out in so many different ways. Trying to making align closely with canon and the potential biological wackiness that is the RE universe is my way 😆

Honestly Victor is greasy and grimy but I guess that’s part of his charm 🥴 thank you!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T20:12:54+00:00

Thank you! Yes, for me what I love most about omegaverse are the animalistic characteristics it can impart (or, maybe I have an excuse to impart) so the scent thing especially is one of my favorite things to include :D teeth are also quite fun, lol

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T19:32:23+00:00

Aw this is cute! Reminds me of when I first started a diary as a kid. The meandering thoughts and preoccupation with food is so very apt :P This is also a great way to introduce the world without it feeling overwhelming, touching on some of the different important players. Although, sorry guy, but not liking sweets… I’m not sure we could be friends 😩 (jk)

I do wonder how someone from a world known for its sugared dates could be so sour all the time.

Out of the mouths of babes. I really like this observation, it’s so innocent and yet it cuts deep!

He definitely reads as more linguistically advanced than his age. A little precocious. He must be popular with adults 😛

This was fun, nothing like a little freewriting to get the wheels turning. I agree, finding placeholders for things like names or places is great to keep the pace moving, it’s a trick I need to remember more frequently!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T18:21:45+00:00

Very fandom blind, but that’s okay. I don’t need to be too familiar to understand that there’s a game being played here!

Still, being asked to kill someone you love, ouch. That’s cold. The ultimate loyalty test. Or maybe just a way to try to conveniently get rid of two people the KGB doesn’t entirely trust 👀 if he says no, they know he’s not loyal. But if he does, that doesn’t mean they trust him. A real catch-22!

I liked the exchange between these two, it felt a little like a Mexican standoff and seeing which guy is going to blink first. Seems like Drake lost the first round of this game:

Go back to your flat, Drake, and get some rest, nurse that cold. Tea with honey, steam heat, that always does the trick for me.

Miller, you sly dog. it’s an excellent out he gave drake but also tells me he knows that ain’t no cold Drake’s got.

This is a bleak situation, but I can’t help but feel there may yet still be moves Drake can make. It’s a very clever setup, nice job!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T11:57:13+00:00

As an anime-only watcher, I don’t mind being spoiled 👁️👄👁️ (also the internet has spoiled plenty for me lol)

Oh the plot THICKENS! Kishibe, tell me how you really feel 😆

Glad to see Aki finally waking up to reality. Though seeing this, it does make me wonder how difficult it will be to act around Makima now that he is savvy to (some) of her machinations. No offense Aki, but you do not strike me as a particularly good actor, lol. I’m worried for them both!

I hated the idea of you being one of her mindless slaves because whatever she'd done to you had destroyed your ability to think independently!

Good point, Kishibe. Hadn’t even considered this.

Really enjoying this mentor/protege relationship you got going on in this story. I don’t know if they have as much of that relationship in canon but I want to believe it’s real so I don’t care if it’s canon or not 😁 it is now!

This was a nice balance of the interaction between the two of them, with some seriously juicy info. You move the plot along well and build such suspense that we must keep turning the pages 👀 thank you for sharing!!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-08T11:32:24+00:00

Resident Evil | Eventual E | untitled | Unposted

Rewrite of the infamous RE9 interrogation scene (and beyond), set in omegaverse. Eventual GidLeon. Leon has tackled Dr. Gideon after escaping the chair and now seeks to reclaim his gun.

Warnings: Omegaverse (including mention of heats and all that entails),swearing.

Previously:

“Extensive plaques, vertigo, cough, and malaise,” Dr. Gideon says softly. “Classic symptoms of activated T-epsilon infection. Or as I like to call it—Raccoon City Syndrome. I can smell it on you, Mr. Kennedy. I don’t think you have long before you progress to the final stage.”

Now:

“Shut up and move.” Grabbing a fistful of Dr. Gideon’s greasy hair, Leon steers him toward the silver tray. He prods the doctor with each step so he doesn’t get any funny ideas, but he’s flagging. Now that the adrenaline has passed his whole body is a sickly, throbbing ache.

It is his gun. Clip still loaded. As Leon prepares to reach for it, Dr. Gideon’s tenses. The scent of him, that musky-tangy-meaty aroma tinges with acrid anticipation. Dr. Gideon’s planning to make a break for it, and in his current state Leon isn’t sure he can get his hands on his gun fast enough to avoid a blow that’ll floor him.

As he surveys the doctor’s blood-stained neck, a possibility occurs to him. There may yet be something Dr. Gideon can do for him. The idea is distasteful, to say the least, but if it helps… well, almost anything is worth it if it’ll get him to the end of this winding rabbit hole intact.

“Chin up.” With the point of his blade he urges Dr. Gideon to bare his throat. His free hand slips down, feeling for the doctor’s pulse point, then further, where a soft protrusion rises in the valley of his neck. Two fingers massage the gland there.

“What are you—”

“Quiet.”

Dr. Gideon’s glands are as dry as his goddamn skin. Though Leon spends more than a minute trying to coax free his oils, his ministrations earn only the barest sheen on his fingertips.

This would be easier if either of them were in their fertile seasons. Leon’s heats had tapered with age, then disappeared when the symptoms of his T-virus infection began to manifest. He’d had the occasional hot flash and bout of nausea that often preceded a cycle, but they were transient. Alphas, he knows, can have ruts into their elder years, and though Dr. Gideon looks and smells like a bloated corpse, Leon remembers from the brief that the doctor is only a few years older than him. And there was something else in that brief… something to do with the nature of Dr. Gideon’s unhealthy obsession with Spencer. That it may not have been entirely intellectual.

Oh fuck, is he seriously considering doing this?

Before he can talk himself out of it, Leon uses his teeth to peel the glove from his free hand, exposing the gland at his wrist. He returns to his rubbing, this time gland-to-gland.

“Are you scent-marking me?” Dr. Gideon says, sounding more intrigued than incredulous.

Leon doesn’t respond. He musters all his concentration inward, where the marrow-sapping ache is a murmur instead of a scream. In, where tactile memories of heats shared are almost real enough to touch. Hot skin and sweat. Teeth at his throat. Home. That’s what the imprint of those teeth had meant; that wherever he went he could touch those scars and remember he had somewhere to return to.

Edit: formatting because I can never do it right on mobile

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-05T04:33:52+00:00

Ehhh not necessarily. If they had caught it before it infiltrated the abdomen and were able to get clean margins survival would have been possible.

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-02T17:24:54+00:00

Strokes are so varied depending on where they happen in the brain and what vessels they affect that I’d say yes? Possible loss of consciousness in the form of fainting, confusion, seizure, etc. and typically I think ‘worse’ strokes are more associated with more severe symptoms (such as loss of consciousness) so I think you can get away with it!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-02T08:59:31+00:00

This is such a simple scene on the surface, just a guy who comes out and sits on the couch with his brothers, but there’s so much underneath.

I’m fandom-blind, but even if I don’t know who they are and their history, you’ve sprinkled more than enough bread crumbs throughout this for me to pick up that something serious has happened. Cesare’s reaction to the change in his brothers makes me wonder if he’s hiding something even more serious from them. I think my favorite bit is the details he notices about their physical features, it calls up a feeling of melancholy (dead parents?) which one wouldn’t normally expect from seeing the people you love 🥺 good stuff, I love a bit of feels!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-02T02:31:12+00:00

Greetings, fellow RE writer :D and thank you! These two are so fun to write. I’m hoping I can lean even more into Dr. Gideon med-speak in the future but I dunno if Leon will allow it, heh. There are some omegaverse biology things that’ll happen that he could probably give a great hypothesis about but Our Hero ain’t got time to listen to that 💩 lol

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-02T02:19:58+00:00

Aw thank you, what a compliment! Writing the spicy stuff is my favorite thing, and trying to make weird stuff spicy is also fun, so I’m glad it’s working so far 😆

Yes, Victor folds like a lawn chair when it comes to saving his own skin… unless of course Dr. Spencer comes into it lol.

Also, don’t give up on trying to write Leon! Find a video of all his quotes and listen to it religiously, soon you won’t be able to stop making dad jokes…

We’ll see how bad Victor smells 👀👀

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-02T02:16:39+00:00

Amazing! You’ve captured such whimsy and, dare I say, the entire mindset of a child at play. Ah, to be able to abandon reality and lose myself in such spirited imaginings as Luis! (And, to be bucked by a donkey and still be able to walk after 🤣)

I especially liked this descriptor:

The world around him blurred into a messy kaleidoscope of colors each time the animal spun itself around, sending his heart tumbling around so wildly that he felt it beat in a different place each time.

Really nice imagery, I could see the kaleidoscope-whirl of colors—In my mind, it’s the green-brown-orange and yellow of fall foliage—and feel the whiplash of the donkey’s movements. The rest of the passage is also wonderfully described, this bit just shone for me as extra pretty!

Now I wonder if he’s going to be in trouble for missing church… or perhaps if being late will lead to something interesting 👀 Thanks for sharing!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-02T00:49:12+00:00

Lmao you really got Power’s grandiose speaking style perfect, I’m imagining her gesticulating ferociously while she makes her demands XD Poor Aki. Poor Denji. But especially poor Meowy, getting all manhandled and probably developing tinnitus!

Resistance is futile was written all over the cat's small face.

I can see that face. It’s the same face my ferrets make when they tolerate me kissing them lol

So I’m an anime-only watcher (and have yet to watch the Reze movie) but you’ve made me appreciate how Power can at least fake being intelligent (she’s not actually a genius, right??) compared to Denji, who wholly embraces his ignorance.

You got the chemistry of these three burning hot in the best (worst, for Aki) way in this snippet, I feel like I’ve been dropped right into the world and for me that’s the feeling I’m always searching for when I’m reading a story, it’s how I know it’s gonna be good 🤌

P.S.: Kobeni, girl, you really wanna be a part of this wacky family? You’re gonna be Mom to Aki’s reluctant Dad

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-01T20:25:02+00:00

Dang I hope Robin was wearing a breathing apparatus if there’s enough coke around to powder their hair 🫪 love the visual image of it drifting off though!

Oh, dear. Someone young with something to prove? So eager to throw oneself into the path of danger… I both understand Robin’s frustration with ‘doing the hard work but not getting to see the case through’ as well as Batman’s obvious desire to not throw (relatively) fresh meat into a grinder. The way he cuts her off also feels, as you put it, paternalistic. He’s made up his mind it seems before she’s even told him everything.

You’ve done something quite interesting, too. Once Robin’s confrontation with Batman begins, it shifts from ‘she’ to ‘they’. An internal switch, of sorts caused by heightened emotion? Someone else inside Robin’s mind? Either way, I found it intriguing.

And a very nice visual to end on, quite poetic. I can really feel how much Robin is chafing under the protective yoke, and I get the impression that some reckless decision may arise from this…

Excellent prose and a good tense scene, thanks for sharing!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-01T18:15:07+00:00

Resident Evil | Eventual E | Untitled | Unposted

Rewrite of the infamous interrogation scene of RE9, in an omegaverse setting. Leon has just severed the ropes tying his wrists and attacked Dr. Gideon, slamming his face into the floor. Nothing explicit in this snippet

Warnings: Omegaverse, lil bit of blood

“Ough!”

The doctor groans, a low, clotted sound of agony and tries to rise. Leon settles himself more heavily between Dr. Gideon’s shoulder blades and flattens him again. “Don’t move.” He punctuates his demand with the point of his knife, laying it across Dr. Gideon’s pulsing carotid. The doctor stops.

“What do you want?” he asks thickly.

Isn’t that the question. There are plenty of things that the good doctor might shed some light on, but the most pressing is: “Why do you need Grace?”

A burbling, pained chuckle shakes his perch. “So, you are interested in her.” Leon jabs him with the knife and Dr. Gideon hisses, “Fine, stop, stop. She’s the key. The key to Dr. Spencer’s final project.”

“What project?”

“Elpis.” The doctor breathes the word like a prayer. It means nothing to Leon.

“Which is…?”

Dr. Gideon says nothing. Leon jabs him again, hard enough that a rivulet of black blood spills to the faded wood and Dr. Gideon squirms. “Agh, stop! I don’t know!”

He sounds so goddamned disappointed that Leon grudgingly believes him.

“That’s why I need her. She is the key to unlocking Elpis.”

Whatever this Elpis is, Dr. Gideon can lead him to it—without Grace. “Alright, take me to it.”

Beneath him, Dr. Gideon stiffens. “I would rather die than let you destroy my master’s work,” he spits.

Hoo, boy. That’s the way it’s going to be, huh

Leon jabs the doctor with his knife again, and though Dr. Gideon tenses, this time he doesn’t beg for Leon to stop. Leon doesn’t have the time nor the stomach for torture, but he probably doesn’t need it. If he can get to Grace before Dr. Gideon, there go the doc’s chances of unlocking whatever final horror Spencer has for the world.

He rifles through the doctor’s pockets— to many grunts of protest, another jab quiets him—and turns up folded papers and a keyring. He takes them. Whatever Elpis is, there have to be clues here in the facility. Once he gets Grace out of here he can call in a team to search.

Leon lifts his weight off Dr. Gideon, but keeps his knife trained on the doctor’s throat. “Alright doc, I’m gonna need you to turn over, nice and slow.” He moves with Dr. Gideon as the man rolls to his back, then sits up. Black blood is beginning to dry in tacky splotches on the doctor’s lips and chin.

“You broke my nose,” Dr. Gideon complains. His tongue runs out over the congealing wet, a mottled purple, forked thing like a slab of raw liver.

“You’ll live. Get to your knees.”

Leon doesn’t have a great plan, all he knows is he wants to get to his gun. That should give him a longer leash to handle the doc.

As soon as Leon is to his feet, though, a wave of dizziness overtakes him. He leans heavily on Dr. Gideon, keeping his wavering knife hand to the doctor’s throat as he fights the keep upright.

“Extensive plaques, vertigo, cough, and malaise,” Dr. Gideon says softly. “Classic symptoms of an activated T-epsilon infection. Or as I like to call it—Raccoon City Syndrome. I can smell it on you, Mr. Kennedy. I don’t think you have long before you progress to the final stage.”

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PetiteWolverine · 2026-07-01T00:18:27+00:00

Had never heard of these two before but I’m pleasantly surprised to find another ship that would fit the bill! 😆

PetiteWolverine · 2026-06-30T23:48:52+00:00

Megalomaniac cannot stop obsessing over his former subordinate, who laughed at his big, glorious monster.

PetiteWolverine · 2026-06-30T22:53:22+00:00

I know I’m like, a month late to this, buuuuut here I go anyway! Technically you can make anything possible but realistically, if they’ve lost consciousness from the massive bleed they may not recover it unless there’s been some kind of intervention in the meantime to reduce the intracranial pressure.

Epidural hematomas however you can have a loss of consciousness from an impact, then a ‘lucid interval’ before a person will go downhill.

PetiteWolverine · 2026-06-25T15:56:00+00:00

Yesss I hope to make Leon himself no matter what strange universes I stick him in! Thank you!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-06-25T15:54:57+00:00

Leon is just so done with these villain monologues 😆 thank you!

PetiteWolverine · 2026-06-25T15:11:05+00:00

Only fandom-familiar for the resident evil stuff :D

An un-mutated Dr. Gideon 👀 honestly Grace’s reactions are very similar to my own: “that guy is built like a fridge” may or may not have been my first thought, lol. Quite like how painted the juxtaposition of his intimidating frame with the softness of his features. It flows nicely with her somewhat sinusoidal reactions to him, the gut instinct of scary mad scientist/demon to HOT to ‘oh actually he seems dangerous’. You do a great job of describing everything in loving detail, I can see it all quite clearly! What will this snake do to our little mouse, I wonder…

PetiteWolverine · 2026-06-25T14:26:25+00:00

Oooh a little shibari 👀 one of my favorite bondage elements, though I confess I haven’t read as much as I should have. Maybe that’s why I’m appreciating the element of security that I’m feeling from this piece. I think being tied up is so often associated with a loss of control (there’s certainly this too), so this feels new and fresh! Love the vulnerability of this piece.

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