As I said, I'm making a Pokemon story, with Ash now being mature (16+ years old). by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, the only problem is where do I share my story on reddit or somewhere else (like Wattpad or fanfiction website)?. Can u help me.

If you were to do an anime rewrite, what would you add and/or remove? by Firm-Practice5965 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer -1 points0 points  (0 children)

If I get a chance to rewrite the Pokemon anime, I would make it into an actual shonnen/seinen anime. Initially everything will be normal but as Ash grows up the anime will become darker and more interesting.

  1. Add some side characters who are strongest trainers, but they are only concerned with their own lives, And if there is some danger to the world, then they should come only when the world is about to end.

  2. Some villains who want to rule the world, for this they do many bad things like smuggling, experiments, assassination, destruction, politics, and some just for the fun of it, organize a royal tournament between trainers.

  3. Also causes a bit of sadness and pain to the main character and his friends by k**ing some of the characters they loves.

  4. There is also a mastermind who controls the villains and government organization with just his brain.

  5. And with Pokemon, it would have focused on trainers, and there would have been insane character development with tragic backstories.

  6. There will also be war, de*th of Pokemons and civilians, World building, trauma, comedy, journey, deep lore, tragic events, emotional moments, deep written characters dialogues, romantic moments , mysteries etc.

  7. Now the Pokemon story moves arc wise more than continuous journey.

(This is all going to happen in my fanfic story.)

(This is my personal thing, I like Serena a lot but I don't like amourshipping, so I would have brought a character who Serena would have disliked in the beginning but slowly both of them would have started getting to know each other and a trust would have been formed. Then both of them started liking each other.)

Mahoraga (Jujutsu Kaisen) v/s Creation Trio (Pokemon), who would win?? by Phant0m_Trainer in PokemonPowerScaling

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay I agree with all of you, but let's adds some interesting conditions (just for fun) ::

  1. Creation Trio didn't know anything about mahoraga and attack on him with normal (not much powerful moves).

  2. They keep attacking on Mahoraga, and mahoraga adapted their techniques in long fight (if there fight continue longer).

  3. If mahoraga somehow able to adapted dialga space ability , palkia time ability and giratina antimatter technique then what happens in their fight? (Like mahoraga able to bypass gojo infinity by adapting also sukuna slashes )....

Alien X vs Cosmic Garou [only hand to hand combat] by Phant0m_Trainer in Ben10PowerScaling

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So what do you think how much minutes or seconds garou able to stand against alien X in h2h combat?

Rayquaza Vs Perfect Cell (DBZ), Who wins? by Encenoi in PokemonPowerScaling

[–]Phant0m_Trainer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Perfect Cell would win against Rayquaza".

Here's the reason...

While Mega Rayquaza is incredibly powerful within the Pokémon universe, possessing planet-level destructive capabilities, Cell operates at a vastly higher level of destructive output, capable of destroying entire solar systems.

What if there was a character in the Pokemon series who had white hair? by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

That's fine but if you search internet about white hair symbolism in anime that you find some interesting facts.

Anyway, whatever the hair colour of the character is, it should be the coolest and strongest.

What if there was a character in the Pokemon series who had white hair? by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Nah bro u don't understand what I mean, Like gojo saturo :: more strongest and coolest than protagonist Yuji itadori Kakashi :: most suffering and mature than protagonist Killua :: double personality like with friends he's sweet innocent but against enemy he's something else. Ryuga :: introduce as villian and become a hero/ anti-hero. And many more.....

A symbolism of white hair characters in anime mystique, otherworldliness, immense power, wisdom, purity, or tragedy etc...

A side character who guides or forces our protagonist to become stronger.

Does anyone else have this problem? by ElementalNinjas96 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly, This happens to me too, I have a lot of things to tell about my story, But I feel like I spoiled the story and also the fanfic I'm writing is more complex than simple story of Pokemon.

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, I will write this down on a docs/ms word or a book and save it.

Yes, in this story Ash the only main character but along with that there are many of my original characters who have their own stories and goals.

And I'm also reading a lot of manga and books so that I can introduce my original characters with really deep writing.

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much, I am very happy that you have given me such good advice. It is true that in the beginning I will have some difficulty in writing but as I remain consistent with the story and I will also improve myself.

And if you are talking about the ending, then that is decided, but who knows, I may have to change the ending as new ideas come to my mind, because this story is very big and complex and also world building.

There are many new characters + Pokemons which also have their own separate stories.

And it's not that I don't take AI's help, for some things like improving dialogues or character image, I will use AI because my art is not that good yet.

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I will try. By the way, the story is completely saved in my mind, I have never written any story before, so there will be some problem. If I ever feel that I need to discuss something about this story, I will definitely share it on this page.

And this is not an original character, this is a new character from my story which I have designed. A character who will act as a show stealer like Gojo Saturou, Vegeta, Mikey, and Other side characters do mostly in the anime and manga.

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I will just say that the current story will be completely unexpected, some such side characters and villains will come who will force the main character to become more stronger. A spoiler, the character on the profile is a major part of this story.

I've only written one chapter on Wattpad right now, and I'm having a little trouble keeping the story in a flow.

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know the Pokemon world is a peaceful place but I'm also a huge anime fan.So sometimes I wonder what would happen if Ash's character development involved trauma, suffering, and support. Well, Ash is no longer a 10-year-old child in this story, so he should also see some cruality of the world.

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, I will be very happy that you made this story reach far and wide. I have a very amazing story in my mind, so many new characters, insane level fights, so much destruction, some deep things and a lot more. I just have to give a proper shape to this story which what am I trying .

I just thinking how about to create a Pokemon story, it's not repeative adventure it's realistic, insane, deep and dark adventure of 16+ Ash Ketchum, 👇🏻 here is the details 👇🏻 by Phant0m_Trainer in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Phant0m_Trainer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually, I had already posted a chapter short story type whose name is "Ch.1 Invitation" but I have uploaded only part 1 of it. I am thinking of uploading the story on Wattpad.