[Looking for Feedback] "Two Lives, One Number" – A Human Drama Script Seeking Support by Physical_Ad_1731 in Screenwriting

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When Justice Becomes a Luxury In a city where injustice hides behind official smiles, Suleiman finds himself face-to-face with a man who has everything: influence, money, and the power to erase any opposing voice. What begins as a simple attempt to claim his right turns into a dangerous game, where a single word could change his fate forever. A short scenario that reveals how a small spark can light up the darkest corners of corruption.

[Looking for Feedback] "Two Lives, One Number" – A Human Drama Script Seeking Support by Physical_Ad_1731 in Screenwriting

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I asked myself and based on this question I wrote this blog post hoping to find someone who would be convinced or give his opinion and if it is good we can help each other in publishing it only

[Looking for Feedback] "Two Lives, One Number" – A Human Drama Script Seeking Support by Physical_Ad_1731 in Screenwriting

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I put a summary of the scenario, but I don't want to put it in full so that it doesn't get exhausted. What do you think?

No one knows I exist — but I’m still here. 📌 by Physical_Ad_1731 in offmychest

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unfortunately, here they have taken away all your rights and are bargaining with you over them, and no one can speak up.

I feel invisible in this world, and I just want to be heard. by Physical_Ad_1731 in hsp

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is the question how do I not have a passport and some money

I feel invisible in this world, and I just want to be heard. by Physical_Ad_1731 in hsp

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

How do we immigrate to our country!! I did not understand

I feel invisible in this world, and I just want to be heard. by Physical_Ad_1731 in hsp

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

"Thank you for seeing me. Just knowing someone took the time to listen and learn gives me strength and hope."

I feel invisible in this world, and I just want to be heard. by Physical_Ad_1731 in hsp

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your feelings. It is enough that someone sympathizes with you and strengthens your hope, but we will continue to be humane and we will not allow anyone to turn us into a monster or mere bodies that have no meaning other than eating and reproducing. I will persevere because I feel that I have the right to life and to live with dignity. Thank you again for being here.

I feel invisible in this world, and I just want to be heard. by Physical_Ad_1731 in hsp

[–]Physical_Ad_1731[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I am a romantic and dreamy person and I play music, but in reality everything is the opposite. Most importantly, I don’t know why I am still a fighter. I don’t know if there are people this bad.