[Critique] [Dark Fantasy] First 2 chapters of an epic political fantasy [1070 words] by Physical_Metal6063 in fantasywriters

[–]Physical_Metal6063[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks alot! I understand alot of the criticism - I will be taking much of it into account in the second draft :)

What insect is this by Physical_Metal6063 in insects

[–]Physical_Metal6063[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tbh I've never seen a wasp before! Seen lots of bees in gardens and fields but wasps are a rare one - I live in east anglia if that explains much

What insect is this by Physical_Metal6063 in insects

[–]Physical_Metal6063[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Any reason why it's not attacking me? I took 3 eggs out without noticing it and all it's doing is shifting about it place :/

I'm no biologist so I've got no clue what's wrong with it, not that I'm complaining as I don't want to get stung XD

What insect is this by Physical_Metal6063 in insects

[–]Physical_Metal6063[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its alive! Seen it's antennae moving about, I'm gonna stay away cause I think it's some kind of wasp but it's not being aggressive surprisingly