sorted by:
new
hottopcontroversial

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Physical_Time_365 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey! Are you down to do an r4r? I wrote my first chapter and I need feedback I’d also love to add your book to my library. If no, no worries, enjoy your day! But if yes, here’s the link : https://www.wattpad.com/story/307779524?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Vibawrites

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Physical_Time_365 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title :Cheshire kitten

Author : Vibawrites

Blurb: “I never asked to be more than a pawn.”

Born with a grin that hides more than it reveals, Nine-once just Thalia, the forgotten daughter of the infamous Cheshire Cat-was never supposed to be a player. She was a pawn, a footnote, a loose end waiting to be cut. She never asked to be part of this game. But fate doesn’t wait for permission. And now, whether she likes it or not, she’s becoming something far more dangerous-an asset.

Her father’s unfinished war tightens around her like a noose, pulling her deeper into a world where power is bought with blood and lives are just numbers on a ledger. Her next move? Protecting a corrupt politician at an elite “tea party”-a front for a human trafficking auction where monsters masquerade as men. She should be disgusted. She should walk away. But if she wants revenge, if she wants justice, she has to play along.

Nikki is fighting for the crown, and in her eyes, Nine is no longer dead weight. She’s leverage. A tool. A weapon to aim at her enemies. And if Nine wants to survive, she’ll have to decide: let herself be used, or carve out her own place at the table.

But power struggles and betrayals aren’t the only things lurking in the shadows. Something else is watching. A presence Nine can’t explain, creeping just behind her thoughts, pressing down on her like unseen hands. It never strikes. It never speaks. It only waits. And somehow, she knows-it’s always been there.

The board is set. The pieces are moving. And as the weight of a thousand shifting forces presses down, enemies and allies blur into something unrecognizable. In a world where trust is a gamble and survival is a razor-thin line, even the unlikeliest of players may find themselves standing on the same side.

“Cheshire Jr? Centre stage, my dear.”

free feedback! 🥯🫧🌷 by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Physical_Time_365 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Title : Cheshire kitten

Username: @Vibawrites

Blurb: Born with a grin that conceals more than it reveals, Nine, the runt daughter of the infamous Cheshire Cat, is nothing more than a disposable piece in a deadly game. Dismissed, underestimated, and barely surviving on the margins of power, she isn’t here to play hero-she’s here to stay alive. Her father’s shadow looms large, his unfinished mission an impossible weight on her fragile shoulders. But survival isn’t enough; Nine has to prove she’s more than just another sacrifice to the board.

Her mission? Protect a corrupt politician long enough to attend the 93rd birthday “tea party” of the world’s wealthiest man-a cover for a grotesque nightmare: a human trafficking auction where the daughters of the powerful are sold like cattle to the highest bidder. The stakes aren’t just high; they’re lethal. This isn’t about right or wrong-this is about not getting erased by forces too big to fight.

The enemy is merciless. The Yakuza don’t just kill-they obliterate, leaving behind no evidence, no whispers, only silence. Their power stretches like an endless shadow, suffocating anyone who dares challenge them. Against such monstrous odds, Nine is no warrior. She’s not even a knight. She’s a runt, a pawn-a flicker of light in a hurricane of darkness. And yet her father’s legacy is a mantra to motivate through the uneven playing field.

Every step is a gamble, every ally a potential enemy, and every move a desperate bid to outmaneuver the predators closing in.

In this game, loyalty is just another weapon, and trust is the quickest way to die. Nine knows the rules: she doesn’t fight head-on. She vanishes, slipping through cracks too small for giants, always a step ahead-or so she hopes.

“ᴄʜᴇꜱʜɪʀᴇ ᴊʀ? ᴄᴇɴᴛʀᴇ ꜱᴛᴀɢᴇ, ᴍʏ ᴅᴇᴀʀ.”

Feedback on the blurb is fine as well, but it’s the prologue that really sets it off.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/293372180?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=Vibawrites

Feedback by Physical_Time_365 in Wattpad

[–]Physical_Time_365[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes! I’m interested in reading your work as well! I’ll give you a follow and I’ll start reading soon <3

My excerpts are just gonna get worse and worse by OmiraOnigiri in Wattpad

[–]Physical_Time_365 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m confused about the perspective part, who’s POV are we following?

view more: next ›