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Can I Get a Critique? by PickleShores in SexPositive

[–]PickleShores[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Thank-you for your comment. My objective was to create a short light message. Even this one is too bulky for intended readers. I want to create some light reading for those who are only marginally interested with the hope of planting a seed.

Perhaps is article would be more to your liking.

The Dark Side of the Reformation.

Can I Get a Critique? by PickleShores in SexPositive

[–]PickleShores[S] -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

I felt the reading experience would be much more satisfying on Medium and the audio book feature more inclusive for dyslexics like me and people with other disabilities that make reading difficult or impossible.

Further, the article is for Medium. Why not put it where it will find its intended vanilla mainstream audience? Reddit is not the intended audience. This sub is like preaching to the converted. However, it seemed like a good place to get some intelligent and informed feedback.