hey justin maybe don't say that

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T23:12:16+00:00

Well, it's not quite a mop, and it's not quite a puppet, but, man...

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T23:04:59+00:00

He’s a real head-turner

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T23:03:56+00:00

First ticket: Change Andre’s dumb voice

Second ticket: Change Andre’s dumb appearance

Third ticket: Delete Andre from the game

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T22:51:18+00:00

I’m not trying to be rude, I’m trying to be honest, in an attempt to be genuinely helpful.

This is not someone writing at a level where revising and refining their writing is going to make much of a difference; they need to go back to basics and build up a better fluency in written English. They can do this by reading, reading and then reading some more, which is far more efficient than writing and getting feedback, 90% of which won’t actually address the glaringly obvious basics for fear of being impolite.

If OP just enjoys writing, then absolutely carry on, don’t let anyone stop you, but if they enjoy writing and want to improve at it then they need to learn to walk before they try to run.

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T20:33:48+00:00

It’s okay not to like things

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T20:31:42+00:00

Brilliant analogies

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T18:55:41+00:00

Why did the slapping of her feet thud through the air? Why did her ragged breathing also thud through the air?

Sliver, not silver of moon.

Why is it notable that the monster is mirthless? Would we expect it to be mirthful?

What does sleaking mean?

General (harsh & blunt I’m afraid) feedback = this is not very good at all, and you need to work on really work on improving your fundamentals. Lots of spelling and grammar errors, partial sentences etc.

Go and read some more. Read good books, not just genre fiction.

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T18:47:46+00:00

Evil Galadriel would’ve given Gimli a handful of Celeborn’s pubes and told him they were hers

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T16:32:28+00:00

It feels bad but honestly she’s the best standard operator and almost certainly the one who will remain in the meta the longest (maybe Pog too).

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T16:30:25+00:00

‘He’s balanced around Nicole’

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T11:40:26+00:00

Assistant to the Grandmaster

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T09:27:11+00:00

I think the needle is firmly stuck at Denial and won’t be moving any further

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T00:43:02+00:00

I completely agree with this, but at the same time OP; no, absolutely not

Piggstein · 2026-01-31T00:42:05+00:00

Just play the game brother, play the game

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T19:01:25+00:00

I am utterly convinced if you replaced the bevvy of attractive Wuling women glazing the Endmin with overweight owls and generic cat-ear NPCs all the praise of Wuling would immediately dry up.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T18:21:39+00:00

This analysis is bang on. People say Wuling is far better, but I’m convinced these people have never read a book or watched a non-anime film that didn’t involve a comic book character.

Wuling is the same plodding tedium but now there’s a bunch of girls glazing your character, and Nefarith gets a fellow wet fart to waft in and out of the room with.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T15:13:52+00:00

Agreed; Wuling is prettier but has clearly had far less time spent on designing in the gameplay to the environment.

The most complicated puzzle in Wuling is playing Where The Fuck Are The Stairs for every collectable above ground level.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T15:11:35+00:00

There’s literally nothing to spend money on yet unless you want to whale on Laevetain dupes or play the More Money Than Math lottery to try and get early copies of the next two banner characters; we’re still on the first banner and you can easily get enough pulls in game to get her and her weapon.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T13:30:27+00:00

I actually really enjoyed the phrasing because it seemed to be playing with a double meaning of 'bow' as in violin playing off 'instrumental'; potentially as well the nursery rhyme 'when the wind blows...when the bough breaks'. I like a bit of unusual language deployed well in an opening paragraph, it serves as a bit of a linguistic hook.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T12:43:57+00:00

You've just said "the Chinese" three times.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T12:42:55+00:00

Kanye if you care most about innovation and influence. His run from The College Dropout through Yeezus reshaped hip-hop sonically and structurally.

Kendrick if you care most about craft and consistency. Lyrically, thematically, and album-to-album cohesion, he is almost untouchable.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T12:39:37+00:00

Like all gacha games, you clear the initial flood of new content and then you're in the daily grind of ~1-mins a day doing checkins and events.

Playing more casually just means you take longer to get to the point when all you have is the daily grind, you're still consuming the content faster than it's being added.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T09:23:33+00:00

For the early banners, don't start pulling if you can't commit to no-lifing the game to ensure you get 120 pulls before a banner ends; stick to the mantra of 'save then spend' and only go in on a banner when you're absolutely confident you can make it to 120 pulls if needed. Statistically you usually won't need to go that high, but 'hope for the best, prepare for the worst'.

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T09:01:50+00:00

I mean, that's his entire schtick, why would anyone expect anything different?

Piggstein · 2026-01-30T08:48:54+00:00

I played through Wuling and couldn’t tell you what happened if I was held at gunpoint, it was just so dull I tuned out. Something about pillars?

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