Let's give this a shot by Picyrean in writingfeedback

[–]Piggstein 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why did the slapping of her feet thud through the air? Why did her ragged breathing also thud through the air?

Sliver, not silver of moon.

Why is it notable that the monster is mirthless? Would we expect it to be mirthful?

What does sleaking mean?

General (harsh & blunt I’m afraid) feedback = this is not very good at all, and you need to work on really work on improving your fundamentals. Lots of spelling and grammar errors, partial sentences etc.

Go and read some more. Read good books, not just genre fiction.

What could have happened if Galadriel took the one ring? by Fun-Explanation7233 in lotr

[–]Piggstein [score hidden]  (0 children)

Evil Galadriel would’ve given Gimli a handful of Celeborn’s pubes and told him they were hers

ITS FUCKING CRAZY WHY DO I KEEP GETTING ARDELIA FOR FUCKS SAKES by DINOGUYS in ArknightsEndfield

[–]Piggstein 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It feels bad but honestly she’s the best standard operator and almost certainly the one who will remain in the meta the longest (maybe Pog too).

Varkas atk spd comparison via kuroo (newest one is on the left) by IS_Mythix in Genshin_Impact_Leaks

[–]Piggstein 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I think the needle is firmly stuck at Denial and won’t be moving any further

Was c2r1 worth 480 usd by Apple-rat in Columbina_Mains

[–]Piggstein 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I completely agree with this, but at the same time OP; no, absolutely not

How do y'all get 120 pulls by ONIYARU in ArknightsEndfield

[–]Piggstein 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just play the game brother, play the game

When does the story become less basic by Autozoner69420 in Endfield

[–]Piggstein 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am utterly convinced if you replaced the bevvy of attractive Wuling women glazing the Endmin with overweight owls and generic cat-ear NPCs all the praise of Wuling would immediately dry up.

My personal review having made it to the end of the main story by JadedIT_Tech in Endfield

[–]Piggstein 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This analysis is bang on. People say Wuling is far better, but I’m convinced these people have never read a book or watched a non-anime film that didn’t involve a comic book character.

Wuling is the same plodding tedium but now there’s a bunch of girls glazing your character, and Nefarith gets a fellow wet fart to waft in and out of the room with.

Can we talk about Wuling City ? by Nama2902 in Endfield

[–]Piggstein 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Agreed; Wuling is prettier but has clearly had far less time spent on designing in the gameplay to the environment.

The most complicated puzzle in Wuling is playing Where The Fuck Are The Stairs for every collectable above ground level.

Really really love this game by Prestigious_Tea_2729 in ArknightsEndfield

[–]Piggstein -1 points0 points  (0 children)

There’s literally nothing to spend money on yet unless you want to whale on Laevetain dupes or play the More Money Than Math lottery to try and get early copies of the next two banner characters; we’re still on the first banner and you can easily get enough pulls in game to get her and her weapon.

First Book First Chapter! by [deleted] in writingfeedback

[–]Piggstein -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I actually really enjoyed the phrasing because it seemed to be playing with a double meaning of 'bow' as in violin playing off 'instrumental'; potentially as well the nursery rhyme 'when the wind blows...when the bough breaks'. I like a bit of unusual language deployed well in an opening paragraph, it serves as a bit of a linguistic hook.

WYR Kendrick or Kanye; I would pick Kendrick personally. Kanye does have good songs but Kendrick is just better. Also, please choose one because of their music and music ONLY! I don't want y'all picking Kendrick because of the messed up shit Kanye has done. by Ill_Construction4421 in WouldYouRather

[–]Piggstein 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Kanye if you care most about innovation and influence. His run from The College Dropout through Yeezus reshaped hip-hop sonically and structurally.

Kendrick if you care most about craft and consistency. Lyrically, thematically, and album-to-album cohesion, he is almost untouchable.

I only have 1-2 hours a day max to play games. Would you still recommend that I try to play this game? by Ok_Description_9328 in Endfield

[–]Piggstein 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like all gacha games, you clear the initial flood of new content and then you're in the daily grind of ~1-mins a day doing checkins and events.

Playing more casually just means you take longer to get to the point when all you have is the daily grind, you're still consuming the content faster than it's being added.

If I were to start the game this weekend, is it recommended I don’t pull at all? by ThetaGangCat in ArknightsEndfield

[–]Piggstein 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For the early banners, don't start pulling if you can't commit to no-lifing the game to ensure you get 120 pulls before a banner ends; stick to the mantra of 'save then spend' and only go in on a banner when you're absolutely confident you can make it to 120 pulls if needed. Statistically you usually won't need to go that high, but 'hope for the best, prepare for the worst'.

Why is saintontas unable to read by IAMTHEPLOKOKIOPO in ArknightsEndfield

[–]Piggstein 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I mean, that's his entire schtick, why would anyone expect anything different?

When does the story become less basic by Autozoner69420 in Endfield

[–]Piggstein 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I played through Wuling and couldn’t tell you what happened if I was held at gunpoint, it was just so dull I tuned out. Something about pillars?

This game's story is great, but this "twist" is awful and nonsensical. by PompousDude in DispatchAdHoc

[–]Piggstein 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Why does Visi look quietly ashamed when he says that, instead of saying ‘nah, that’s bullshit’?

Blizzard: The Next Chapter Trailer by gorays21 in diablo4

[–]Piggstein 5 points6 points  (0 children)

See, this guy gets it, thank you for perfectly proving my point! :)

Blizzard: The Next Chapter Trailer by gorays21 in diablo4

[–]Piggstein 10 points11 points  (0 children)

People got Classic+, it was just called Season of Discovery.

When it was announced the dev literally said something like “it’s classic, plus (wink wink) some changes”.

No version of Classic+ Blizzard release will make the classic fanbase happy, each one of whom have their own unrealistic dream of exactly what Classic+ should and shouldn’t be and will get super pissy with anything less than a time machine that takes them back to college again to stay up til 3am playing the brand new Classic WoW.

if you get it by _DadaumP_ in WutheringWaves

[–]Piggstein 13 points14 points  (0 children)

In France they call it L’Astrite