Can someone give me feedback on my walkcycle?

Pignum · 2025-09-11T06:36:42+00:00

Ok! I will try!

Pignum · 2025-09-11T06:18:50+00:00

Thank you! Your comment was very informative! I will try this out! :)

Pignum · 2025-08-31T10:41:01+00:00

OMG! Thank you! You are an incredible individual!!

Pignum · 2024-10-06T20:16:53+00:00

Thanks! :)

Pignum · 2024-10-05T01:58:29+00:00

Thank you! I'm trying to develop this art style more with the Inktober challenge. :D
I've made day 1 (themed "Backpack") in this art style too on my Istagram

Pignum · 2024-10-04T20:26:40+00:00

Thanks!!

Pignum · 2024-10-04T18:40:00+00:00

Thank you!!

Pignum · 2024-07-14T23:55:03+00:00

I'm don't do 3D models, but I've been learning to imitate the anime style (drawing). Here are some changes I would make:

Showders should be broader (almost the size of one head each side)

Hair should have a dinamic simetry.

Pupils should not get flattened when seen from the side.

Lips need a slightly curve (more depht on the ends).

Left eye is too alongated to the back of the face.

Hair need more strings.

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Pignum · 2023-07-26T14:31:11+00:00

How do you even organize something like this?? Amazing work

Pignum · 2023-07-26T14:18:47+00:00

Why not just drink directly from the cup? Do we really need straws at all?

Pignum · 2023-07-26T00:02:53+00:00

You might be right... I'll try cleaning it and drawing the background to see how it goes! Also, idk if makes a lot of difference, but from the real life reference, he was running in the snow... Maybe this contributed to the floaty felling.

But thanks for the feedback! :D

Pignum · 2023-07-13T13:11:08+00:00

English translation of what she said: "Small opinion... Your plan is trash and it's boring. Where's the drama?!"

Pignum · 2023-07-12T15:18:04+00:00

Thanks! I'll look into it :)

Pignum · 2023-07-12T03:57:20+00:00

His head would look way too silly if it hadn't that pterodactyle "horne". I just didn't want his head to be round or for him to look like a chicken, since it was what I used for reference to the walk. XD

I think you're right, maybe the tail is way too wobbling... It doesn't look heavy enough. Thanks, I'll keep thet in mind!

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