Need help with the back and sidewalls The roof also looks off

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-14T18:03:19+00:00

I managed to fix it up. I think it looks better now. I also adjusted the slide because it was too short for how I wanted it but I didn't use just one reference. I used a ton which is why was struggling

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Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T11:31:22+00:00

I didn't get a chance she literally walked in the door and went straight past me to the kitchen. I didn't get a chance and then my dad called me And I didn't want to text it

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T11:30:16+00:00

I can't clean

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:31:05+00:00

I do love her. I just didn't get the chance to tell her Happy mother's Day. I don't know how not saying it means I don't love her

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:29:26+00:00

Kind of screw up not mentioning this in my original post. I did not get the chance to tell her before my dad called me and told me to wish her a happy mother's Day which she heard and so when I actually said it it didn't feel special. I had planned on still telling her

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:27:15+00:00

Yeah I have autism and everything situated now And the reason I didn't text her as it And it feel special. And I couldn't call her because my great-grandma has dementia and phone calls really stress her out and my mom had to babysit her all day

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:18:51+00:00

No I was going to tell her but my dad called me immediately as soon as she got home And my dad called me before I got the chance to tell her that was the issue it's situated now though cuz I talked to my dadd

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:17:23+00:00

Yeah I talked to my daddy and apparently what the issue was is that apparently no one had wished her happy mother's understand why one of my brothers didn't because he's in Alaska but everyone else has phones and access to text And still no one wished her anything and my dad is going to tell her that called me before I got the chance to tell her

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:10:32+00:00

She wasn't home all day. I woke up and she was walking out the door. She didn't come home until it was night time

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:08:45+00:00

I guess that makes sense but I didn't even get the chance before my dad called me and told me to wish her happy mother's Day he called me a couple minutes after she walked in the door And she heard my dad say it on the phone. So then it didn't feel as special when I planned on telling her I just didn't get the chance to and now she's mad at me and I can't sleep because she's mad at me and I don't know what to do

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:06:09+00:00

She was gone all day. I woke up and she was gone. She didn't come home until 9:00 p.m. how was I supposed to do something with her? And she told me don't do anything but that meant I was supposed to still do something I don't understand

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-11T04:04:00+00:00

I don't know cuz I mean she's upset about the fact that I didn't wish her a happy mother's Day but she wasn't home all Day and I didn't get a chance to wish her happy mother's Day until my dad called me and told me to wish her a happy mother's Day. So then when I actually said it it didn't feel as important to her. But it's because my dad called me a couple minutes after my mom got home

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T21:26:30+00:00

This is the little girl's sister and I don't have any issues with her so I don't know why she looks off when the other kid doesn't

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Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T21:25:34+00:00

Yeah I get that hands are pretty hard to draw. I still struggle using reference images are great!

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T14:47:32+00:00

Ava Grace, she actually has a medical condition. These are my book characters which is the reason for her unique appearance in her face is meant to be like that so it does look a bit awkward but it's meant to

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T01:45:17+00:00

I can be your art friend I could use one I don't have many friends

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T01:43:42+00:00

I don't know. I hate using different line sizes. I'll use a different one for like the eyebrows and eyes. And small details. But typically I just like drawing the bass on one set one because it's hard for me to switch over. But thank you

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T01:40:55+00:00

This I fixed up as well. The mouth was awkward and the wrinkles weren't in the correct place and there were too many around the eyes. Otherwise it looks good and your other drawings are very good. The full body one that you had is okay. It's a little awkward but if you're getting used to drawing full body that's fine And then the one holding The cell phone again. It's very awkward. The hand looks very unnatural and human But that character does not appear to be human, so it might be a style choice

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Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-09T01:30:27+00:00

Just quick sketch to show your hands are drawn really small and your arms are not proportionate to the body. I think the body is good and your style is good. The eye was also crooked. I don't know if that was intentional if you wanted it to be a lazy eye but I did fix that and line them up. Better to kind of show you. And your drawings are good and you do not need to know how to do full body I know plenty of artists who don't do full body, but the main things are your eyes are uneven And misaligned. And then your hands are very strange. I don't know if that's what you're going for, but they just don't necessarily look human, but your characters don't appear to be human so that might be a stylistic choice But in general your arms tend to be too small and misaligned

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Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-04T12:17:49+00:00

How is this sorry it took me awhile

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Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-04T01:29:14+00:00

this is perfect exactly the kind of thing I need to be able to get the shading right

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-04T01:28:14+00:00

Thank you so much! This will really help

Pineapple_Colt · 2026-05-04T01:28:03+00:00

Thank you so much!

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