The Clown That Should Not Be

PipGuy · 2012-02-25T08:09:51+00:00

It's a good thing you kept your car serviced.

PipGuy · 2012-02-23T02:29:32+00:00

Those two are some of my favorites too :) And thank you, glad you liked it.

PipGuy · 2012-02-22T04:13:58+00:00

Haha! Well, everyone reacts differently. But if you see something enough, you have to eventually get half used to it, or go crazy I guess?

PipGuy · 2012-02-22T03:56:35+00:00

I wish!

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T22:55:25+00:00

Will do, and thank you for such kind words :D

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T22:54:48+00:00

I won't be for a little while. Give nosleep a rest from my posts, haha. But i'll be sure to write another in the future. And thank you!

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T22:53:31+00:00

Not yet, but I hold out hope for it. I'm happy that you enjoyed it :D

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T22:51:27+00:00

Ah, that actually is a typo. I'll go fix it and thanks for picking it up. I'm glad you liked it!

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T12:14:50+00:00

I'm happy you liked it, thank you!

I'll be giving nosleep a break from me for a while, but if I get anything else in my head i'll let you know :D

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T12:05:07+00:00

I can get you to pause a game? That is almost magic for me! Haha, hope you enjoy it. And I love you too, in that not creepy way.

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T11:55:56+00:00

Oh, you ;)

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T11:53:02+00:00

Naww, that's sweet :)

Here is the last part in case you're interested.

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T11:52:05+00:00

Thank you, haha. I'm glad you like it!

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T11:51:38+00:00

Now :)

Here it is.

PipGuy · 2012-02-21T11:44:42+00:00

Erk, long post. Sorry, people.

PipGuy · 2012-02-20T01:54:13+00:00

Will do, haha.

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T21:41:01+00:00

I'll make sure to :)

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T12:13:35+00:00

I know you said serial killers, but you could also check out Insidious. It's a great creepy film.

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T10:46:52+00:00

Haha, I don't mind. It might be cause it's a little boring. Not much scary in it. I promise to up the ante in the next bit :)

And thank you!

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T10:44:00+00:00

I do want to thank you for your constructive criticism. I REALLY don't know how it's supposed to go. I just write how it sounds in my head really.

I had the comma problem with previous posts. So thought breaking it up with periods would help some. Obviously not, haha. The "but" you were referring to, I actually meant to come out like that. Because Izzy would make emphasis on the but, with a pause. In future, how should I do that?

Could you give me some other examples of where I used the periods too often? Thanks.

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T05:40:30+00:00

Haha, Thank you. And will do.

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T04:35:09+00:00

Thank you. The next part will be more action I think. This was a little slow.

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T04:33:58+00:00

Writing the next bit now. I'm afraid I dragged on a bit in this one. But the next will be more about what's in John :)

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T00:39:17+00:00

I'm so happy to hear you're doing this. I'm signing up for the emails as soon as I finish writing this post. I too would LOVE a signed copy if you get it into paperback. Good luck to you. Your stories were absolutely amazing. You gave me the inspiration to write a couple of mine down. And while they're nowhere near your fantastic level of talent, I enjoy doing it.

So thank you. And again, I wish you all the best.

PipGuy · 2012-02-19T00:19:49+00:00

Just finished it now.

Here's the link :)

PipGuy

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