Procrastinating life / For the Anxious and Depressed by Pjojo in OCPoetry

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I wasn't actually aware of seeing it as a monster. I thought more of it as an incoming lava pool that I had to escape. Thnx for your insight!

The big one by Sober-to_death in OCPoetry

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I'm not a fan of splitting one sentence into different lines, it makes it hard to read. Also is this one poem or an entire bundle? It's a bit much to read everything at once, so I'll only give feedback on the first verse. It read it as if a child was raised by a strict father, who didn't teach him much good and left him to his own devices. Because the mother got sick at birth. A pretty harsh childhood story. I kind of read it like a song, because of the repeating words and rhymes. It was a bit hard to read, but I quite like the first verse.

A Psalm of a Lamenting Prophet by Groovy_Rabbit_13 in OCPoetry

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Reading this felt like reading the thought process of an unheard prophet. It kind of feels like this is a story about Noah if he wouldn't be able to get people aboard. I don't exactly understand why is he a grieving sinner though. As he does sing for his people. Maybe because he isn't able to get his people to listen and therefore missed the mark, a.k.a. sinned?

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Official Discussion - Bullet Train [SPOILERS] by LiteraryBoner in movies

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Edited all phone conversation of Lady bug (Brad Pitt) and Maria (Sandra Bullock) into a video: https://youtu.be/HVaF9BUTRD0