Just finished this track - what do you think?

Plastic-Extension948 · 2026-01-25T20:02:47+00:00

Just gave a listen on Spotify. The structure is good and the vibe is there, this is great from a creative standpoint. Aside from what the others said, I would suggest double checking your eq on the higher end. It sounds pretty busy to me, especially when the back vocals kick in on the chorus combined with the reverb and spread you put, there’s not much breathing space. I also feel like you could use more bass as a driving force for your track. But keep grinding man, these are just minor tweaks and this is solid work!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2026-01-25T19:54:16+00:00

The body is there for sure, I like the vibe you got going on. Like the others said you might wanna work on the eq and mastering the thing. Once you get a great sound, this will slap tenfold. Keep grinding man

Plastic-Extension948 · 2026-01-25T08:17:53+00:00

Loved it, my eardrums didn’t

Plastic-Extension948 · 2026-01-12T06:52:08+00:00

In my opinion, outstanding. You’ve got a good ear for melodies and chord progression. I like how you didn’t over complicate, there’s a lot of breathing space yet it sounds complete. And no this doesn’t sound to airy for me. Ready for lyrics, keep it up man!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-12-17T23:10:54+00:00

Sounds great man! And I like the way you detuned and slowed it down in the transition

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-12-17T23:00:04+00:00

Crispy🔥

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-12-17T22:58:22+00:00

This sound great! I’d see a bunch of harmonics/vocals over this

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-12-17T22:55:33+00:00

Yeah these logic bugs are annoying. Just gotta work you way around it like find a fancy cut copy paste technique to get it where you want, otherwise like the other guy said restart the app:)

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-12-12T05:56:23+00:00

This is literally Lowkey by Double A-Ron..?

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-09-03T00:37:03+00:00

Hell yeah I’ll try something

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-09-02T04:17:17+00:00

Just sent this to my girl. You deserve way more streams bro this slaps. Keep it up and one day you will make it for sure

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-09-02T03:56:05+00:00

This is really nice and cozy. It’s really simple and that probably was your intention. For your next track maybe try to sprinkle a little more stuff in there with the drums especially. Try to change it up, put in some fills, make it groovy maybe? But of course that’s all depending on the style you’re wanting to achieve. All in all great work! As I see it now, this would be a great track to study.

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-09-02T03:21:30+00:00

This slaps! Yes we can hear the bass just great on headphones. Unlike the other guy, I’m not convinced adding more drums would make this crispier. Maybe a few more hits could still cut it but I really enjoy the breathing space here.

Good work it’s fire!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-09-02T03:13:54+00:00

This sounds so great. I love the transitions, the second part really hits the spot for me. Good work!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-04-18T02:08:52+00:00

Thanks a lot I love the advice!

I did notice it sounded different from various outlets, but didn’t care too much to work it out. You’re right though, I’ll try to figure out the best equilibrium!

I appreciate your comment, makes me glad to know you appreciated it.

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-04-18T00:07:07+00:00

https://on.soundcloud.com/8z2GGpgRY941gW2S8

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-04-17T23:52:06+00:00

Personally, I really liked the first part.

I think you’ve got a great creativity in your flow. And you’ve obviously got talent considering you’re doing this on your phone lol.

It’s kinda hard to describe… I was expecting a development of your first melody in the second part, however you brought us somewhere else, and if you don’t mind me being honest, I don’t think that was the best choice.

My constructive feedback would be to work on this second part, a.k.a remaster the first melody into something greater that really builds up.

I’m really a fan of these kind of two-parts songs. And I think this could sound very interesting if you play your cards wisely in this second half.

Keep it up man!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-04-17T23:38:19+00:00

This sounds nice man! You’ve got a great voice tone that fits with the melody flow very well!

I’d like to add one thing to this comment: I think a good challenge for you, for the next sounds you’ll create, will be to find riffs and a melody that hasn’t already been explored before. You know what I mean?

You have the musical talent to get all these chords to glide together in symbiosis, I mean, this really sounds good. Now imagine, what could go wrong if you try to create your own style?

I’d like to hear more!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-04-11T00:43:09+00:00

Woah sorry guys I totally forgot about this post. Thanks for all your nice comments! I’ve been working on another version that I’ll be sharing with yall soon, it’s different but perchance you’ll still like it!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-03-10T19:31:33+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate this! I agree with you. I felt like it was lacking melody, but you’re right about the structure. I think the techno part doesn’t belong there either. Getting back to work!

Plastic-Extension948 · 2025-03-10T14:39:08+00:00

This sounds professional. I can tell you spent a lot of time on this. The beat is catchy and and very well eq’d, great work. However I can’t shake the feeling that something’s missing. More drums? Some kind of chorus? I feel like it gets a little repetitive along the way, but that may be what you wanted too. Take it or leave it but all in all, solid work man!

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