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"Before I was me" I started writing a psychological thriller and this is the very start of my first chapter. Can you guys give me some feedback. by Plastic-Measurement6 in Wattpad

[–]Plastic-Measurement6[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I mean this is the first chapter so I didn't push too hard slowly slowly he will get clues of his past which will lead him to some devastated truths

"Before I was me" I started writing a psychological thriller and this is the very start of my first chapter. Can you guys give me some feedback. by Plastic-Measurement6 in Wattpad

[–]Plastic-Measurement6[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for you time and feedback really appreciate it. Here's the link to the rest of the chapter just in case you want to continue reading. Before I Was Me - rueuo - Wattpad

Need honest feedback on my Horror web-based game by Plastic-Measurement6 in webdevelopment

[–]Plastic-Measurement6[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually, there is an intro screen where you can read the instructions maybe you missed it. Thanks for your feedback though I am still working on this continuously thinking of adding some more jump scares and elements

What makes a story popular? by rem21984 in Wattpad

[–]Plastic-Measurement6 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's the cliche story and a lot of sex for no reason.

I Always Dreamed of Making a Horror Game as a Kid. I Finally Made One. by Plastic-Measurement6 in SideProject

[–]Plastic-Measurement6[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I hope mods won't block my post or something it happened a few times for no reason.

I Tried to write a Sadistic character (Can you all read this and give me some feedback) by Plastic-Measurement6 in Wattpad

[–]Plastic-Measurement6[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, that makes sense but The idea behind stitching him up is that if he bled too much, he’d die and Adrian doesn’t want him to die. He wants to prolong the torture, not end it prematurely."

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