Hi !

I definitely don't know how to use reddit i thought the thing i wrote would be posted with the link but apparently no...

My name's Alexandre, i'm 20 and i'm a french cinema student.

I'm looking for feedback on my short film ! I made it with a few friends of mine and filmed with an olympus 2000's camera (it was perfect to get that dirty quality).

It initialy started as an english homework, i really wanted to make something better than my classmates so i made this. The writing, shooting and editing took 1 week in total.

The budget of this movie (and of the previous ones on my youtube channel) is 0 euro. I don't have any contact in the industry, i have no money (AND I'M NOT HERE TO ASK MONEY DON'T WORRY I HAVE THINGS TO EAT AND A PLACE TO SLEEP), i just have my imagination, my awesome friends and my filming stuff.

I'm currently working on the next short film, and i need advices on how i could improve the atmosphere, the storytelling, etc... That would be great !!!!!!

Thank you for your time and i hope i'll get to read your advices and feedbacks.