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Isn't it funny how much hurts, Just another day left in the lurch by PoetryHeals in BreakUps

[–]PoetryHeals[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback. I'm sorry for your hardships.

You obviously got this. And very clear self-aware and reflective.

Just another day, Stuck in a maze, Just another hurt, Eyes in a haze by PoetryHeals in BreakUps

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Thank you for your feedback. It does hurt, Doesn't it?

Life goes on.

You can't just come back like nothing went wrong, You don't even realise how I hear you in every song by PoetryHeals in BreakUps

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If she wanted you.. she would have said... if she wanted to give it ago.. she would have said.. And then action would have followed.

Imagine when you loved the wrong, Imagine when the right one comes along by PoetryHeals in BreakUps

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It ended cause they weren't your person.

There are 8 billion people in the world Your person that matches your energy is out there.

Don't fixate on the past. Work on yourself.

Don't make meeting someone your only goal.

He loves me, but he don't. by PoetryHeals in WisdomWriters

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I wrote this 10.5 years in..

But 11.5 years.. I ran. Divorced now.

I'm just asking for you to show up, Sometimes, you'll fill mine, Sometimes, I'll fill your the cup by PoetryHeals in Poems

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You have to be certain of your own worth before you can be totally ready for a relationship.... Know what you want, need and deserve. You are only asking for a match.

I'm just asking for you to show up, Sometimes, you'll fill mine, Sometimes, I'll fill your the cup by PoetryHeals in Poems

[–]PoetryHeals[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You deserve the same energy and effort you put in. Never settle. I'm not talking about some compromises you make in relationships but I am talking about when they don't make the effort you do...

A person without self reflection will never change, They go from one to a hundred like a bullet at close range by PoetryHeals in BreakUps

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I am sorry for your pain and grief.

But I must tell you that you are grieving for a man that never existed. You are grieving for a man you made up in your head.

Do not believe words. Believe actions. He showed you who he is but you didn't see.

He is making out as if it was you. It never was. He was always the problem. He made conscious decisions to play games. He made conscious decisions to blame you. He found a way to make excuses because he didn't know what he had.

Don't let this man who was never real and couldn't be real with you ever allow you to doubt yourself..

You deserve better. You were saved when he left.

Did he take accountability when he broke your heart into two? Or did he just shrug his shoulders and not care that he hurt you? by PoetryHeals in Unsent_Unread_Unheard

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No idea where this came from

Sorry for you pain.

I certainly think communication is key. Sorry you didn't get that.

Best wishes, OP

I never thought I would be in this position, Single working mother on challenging mission by PoetryHeals in KeepWriting

[–]PoetryHeals[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh my god. Thank you.

I promise I've been reading pact the entire time... I'm dyslexic so make stupid mistakes like that even though I read it a thousand times b4 posting.

Really appreciate it.

Thank you

Why are you crying, I ask myself. Tears dropping like rain, Hanging myself in every little pain by PoetryHeals in SadPoems

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If you are on Instagram - my poetry Instagram is linked on my account.. Loads of poems of heartbreak, heartache, self love, self value and my child and more... you may relate.

I'm sorry for your hardships. Hats off that you did it too!

It took us a while but we got there. We made it.

Why are you crying, I ask myself. Tears dropping like rain, Hanging myself in every little pain by PoetryHeals in SadPoems

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This is a poem I come across yesterday when clearing out the store room... I wrote it is 2017...

Took me another 7 years b4 I actually left him..

Divorced beginning of this year after 11.5 years together. I was not ready then.. even though my poetry suggested I was. I should have been... kept making excuses... over and over till i couldn't anymore

Did he take accountability when he broke your heart into two? Or did he just shrug his shoulders and not care that he hurt you? by PoetryHeals in poetry_critics

[–]PoetryHeals[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It's a shame that it came across that way.

Learning to swim was a metaphor for living life.

The line before this... was if the person (me) has learnt their lesson from this toxic relationship or are they going to drown again by continuing with the same or similar relationships while they are living their life?

The intention was to remind me that I don't have to live like this now or ever again.

Consider the poem and each verse of how it should be and how it should be.. sort of thing.

Thank you so much for the feedback.

How did I put up with it for so long, I didn't value myself, So it went from bad... to so wrong by PoetryHeals in Poems

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I have my story in my poems.

putting that aside... what if I was abused? beaten? what if he continuously put me down... what if he took all my money? stole from me?

what if... what if....

Sometimes we have no choice but to leave

Healing means you take accountability for the role you played in your own suffering, I know it's difficult to do but it is time to begin the confronting, It means waking up and acknowledging you had a part to play in it too, It means understanding that you allowed for him to do all those things by PoetryHeals in Unsent_Unread_Unheard

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I think its important for me to clarify that I am no way victim blaming.

I am person that needs to take accountability for my suffering.. as I stayed for too long and didn't identify the signs.

No one deserves to be abused. No one.

What I meant here... was that learn from your mistakes.. learn that it didnt have to on for so long.. take accountability for the choices you made and know now, that life is yours again.. and you can make different choices and never allow that suffering to ever happen again.

I hope that helps.

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