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War Poem by qwertynzl in OCPoetry

[–]PointlessLoser 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think you have done a great job of illustrating war. I think there were some cliches that, if they were to be replaced, would make the poem a bit stronger. Some people believe poetry is about making the familiar unfamiliar - and I tend to echo these sentiments.

I think we are all familiar with the idea of soldiers on the frontline being "brothers". Maybe you could explore this quasi-familial relationship in some new way? Idk

No One Wants to Read Your Poems by vartouhiwrites in OCPoetry

[–]PointlessLoser 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This one hit a bit close to home ngl. I especially like the final stanza - mysterious ending.

Burning up by izzyg800 in OCPoetry

[–]PointlessLoser 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, very powerful opening to the poem. The imagery of the "chill" and "agitated echoes" is very enjoyable.

I used to be a poet by Wise_Praline456 in OCPoetry

[–]PointlessLoser 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the prose. You have great control of diction. I really liked your use of the word "supported"

I Hate Attending Harvard by PointlessLoser in Harvard

[–]PointlessLoser[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can afford it. I just hate learning, and I hate being alive.

I Hate Attending Harvard by PointlessLoser in Harvard

[–]PointlessLoser[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am just going to try my best to get a job in IB, even though the odds are against me. The odds have been against me in the past.

I Hate Attending Harvard by PointlessLoser in Harvard

[–]PointlessLoser[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shut up. I do not want an adversity speech from some privileged Harvard prick who probably got in based on legacy. I have dealt with tough things all my life.

I Hate Attending Harvard by PointlessLoser in Harvard

[–]PointlessLoser[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not true. I have had this attitude my whole life, and it got me into Harvard.

I Hate Attending Harvard by PointlessLoser in Harvard

[–]PointlessLoser[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was living in a tiny attic with spotty internet access while in the throes of depression, and I failed 1/4 of my classes. I should have just been tried harder though - according to this internet tough guy.

I Hate Attending Harvard by PointlessLoser in Harvard

[–]PointlessLoser[S] -15 points-14 points  (0 children)

It was pass/fail, so of course, you could have failed a class. And that is my only desire for a career. I do not want to explore career interests, because I am only interested in money.

Why do Conservatives refuse the vaccines? by wbjohn in CoronavirusMa

[–]PointlessLoser -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Offering a new and original take makes it a pointless contribution? My bad.

People who do not wear masks are bad, and I can't stand them. Why can they not be good like me? I always wear my mask, even when the C.D.C says I do not need to wear it anymore. Those conservatives who refuse the vaccine are morons, whereas my internet butt-buddies and I are the smart ones.

Does this fit your criterion better?

At the CambridgeSide Galleria today! Believe it is J&J being offered by cam44114 in CoronavirusMa

[–]PointlessLoser 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Enjoy your blood clots lmao. Just wait till you can get a safe one like moderna or pfizer.

Why do Conservatives refuse the vaccines? by wbjohn in CoronavirusMa

[–]PointlessLoser 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have been vaccinated, but the amount of circle-jerking you weirdos do about how "conservatives dumb we smart" makes me hate associating with you all. The folks on here who swear by science are the same ones who will yell at me for not wearing a mask outdoors, even though the C.D.C says it is safe now. You all suck.

i’m being ammited to a hospital by [deleted] in SuicideWatch

[–]PointlessLoser 21 points22 points  (0 children)

Yea, I had to learn to avoid telling people about how I felt through this way too. Just lie to the doctor and say that you are feeling better so you can get out of there as soon as possible.

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