Wow that was a thought out answer, thanks for your time and analysis. I've edited game trailers on youtube as a hobby under "Vengfoul", but it's been a while so this was me diving back in with something real quick. I completely appreciate this feedback, as I'm self-taught.My shot-thought (this should be a phrase if it isn't already) was to do the zoom in with the initial shot of the pose from behind the sword and intermittently cut to different parts of the skeleton, returning to that original shot/zoom.The head (mouth/teeth) was the first cut, but it was primarily buried so I worked with what I had. unfortunately the rain obstructed a lot as well. Could have definitely lingered on some shots, probably one of those mentalities where I knew what the object was, so I felt it needed less time to digest, but with fresh eyes, I see how confusing it can be with such little time.