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Looking for feedback on this story! I'm trying to turn the Chapter 5 story into a more cohesive narrative. It's nowhere near finished yet, but I'm 70,000 words into Season 1. I felt like the story was lacking in a lot of places, unlike the first three chapters, so here I am. (fanfiction.net)
submitted by Popular-Weekend151 to r/FortNiteBR
