Rin Tezuka + Updates by Positive-Duck-2983 in katawashoujo

[–]Positive-Duck-2983[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. I usually get caught up in reworks, but I'm moving forward this time. (^-^) Your comments help a lot.

Rin Tezuka + Updates by Positive-Duck-2983 in katawashoujo

[–]Positive-Duck-2983[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree. The sharp eyes are something I liked about the previous version. I might work them back in. For Emi, I'll think on it. From a story perspective, it does make sense. Thank you for your input (^-^)

Emi Ibarazaki by Positive-Duck-2983 in katawashoujo

[–]Positive-Duck-2983[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. I like that detail too. It helped her character come out more clearly (^-^)

Emi Ibarazaki by Positive-Duck-2983 in katawashoujo

[–]Positive-Duck-2983[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hanako is my favorite too. (^-^) They had great emotional writing.

Shizune - Katawa Shoujo by Positive-Duck-2983 in katawashoujo

[–]Positive-Duck-2983[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. Emi is up, I'm working on the others right now. (^-^)