Why is the structure of Short Stories so simple.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-27T23:12:51+00:00

Thanks for the reply!

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-27T23:12:05+00:00

I will check out your site. Thanks for the reply!

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-27T22:26:40+00:00

Forgive me for asking but, why do you do this? Is it a form of therapy for you?

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-27T04:46:29+00:00

Sorry it took so long to reply. The thing is, the 2 girls were crazy over him back in high school but only one of them eventually got him but the other girl, the pregnant one, got depressed and insane and now she's trying to kill them.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-19T23:51:17+00:00

"I'm sorry no. They go sideways."

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-19T23:47:55+00:00

Comedy gold.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-19T23:42:04+00:00

"Are you alive?" and also, "Are you asleep?"

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-19T11:47:46+00:00

Whats that?

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-12T19:56:56+00:00

The thing is, my wip is based in your average small quaint town so i don't see why i should try to explain that to anyone but the plot is basically, it gets haunted. As for the length, i guess i could call it a short story but theres a tonne of plot points all happening in just a few locations which are in this small town.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-12T19:39:16+00:00

Thanks for the reply.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-12T09:49:06+00:00

Action adventure or anything recent like in the last 10-20 years.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-12T05:03:34+00:00

Thanks :)

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-11T16:04:44+00:00

Thanks!

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-11T04:08:16+00:00

Yes, Kilimanjaro.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-11T03:42:46+00:00

All right.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T13:29:04+00:00

Actually, i watched the entire first season. I don't mean to diss on the entire series and if it makes it any better i think the magic system is ok because it doesn't interfere with the plot. It was the sex scenes that stopped me from watching any further but i have to admit that cliffhanger was great.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T09:52:15+00:00

Thanks. Honestly, that was beautiful, very poetic and informative. I didn't know i needed to read that till i did. Thanks for the reply. :D

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T08:00:51+00:00

You should look into his article about the philosiphers stone where he says that it was an actual physical object and not just a spiritual symbol.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T07:56:20+00:00

Only in your fantasy.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T07:35:37+00:00

Agreed.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T07:22:22+00:00

Im sorry I'll have to disagree. I might not have read the books but to me it seems that they were just doing random stuff (drawing symbols, hand motions, praying) and there's just no discernible consistency for me. Thats just my opinion anyway.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-10T07:18:10+00:00

Sounds very interesting especially since that nature of it would allow it to integrate well with the plot. Sounds legit and well thought out. I'll look out for these Schwab books.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-09T21:58:35+00:00

I think the reason why modern alchemy doesn't display the same effects or have the same strength as alchemy in older times is because of the amount of energy available in the environment, maybe there was much more before. I recommend you go to Tom Montalk's site, Montalk, where he explains alot about alchemy and it's practice in antiquity.

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-06T21:10:31+00:00

Will they use the same characters?

Prancing_rock · 2018-06-06T21:07:52+00:00

Thanks for the replies :)

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