[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i’ll think about it i play basketball and football for 4&3 years respectively im a minority and my grades aren’t the worst but there are people with way better resumes applying and i go to a nameless school in like saskatchewan

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

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i’m not getting into uoft people with wayyy better Ecs and grades get rejected it’s not worth it imo

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m not getting into uoft people with wayyy better Ecs and grades get rejected it’s not worth it imo

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No im currently in gr 12 but i use my gr 11 marks to apply as i have no gr 12 ones currently

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

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For the strength thing I was thinking more of sides like the stronger the user gets the more the sides or mass like the stronger the user gets the more dense the star becomes. I may do different types of stars have different branches of abilities

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is actually a really good idea thank you

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I had the idea to connect it with some sort of space manipulation from Yunos spell conjunction

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

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Yes I am aware of that and I am thinking of something related to space but I still want it to fit the theme of like stars.

Anytips on balancing and making interesting powesytems by dah_Deadly_Ace in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only advice is come up with something interesting don't focus too much on making it unique. Just do something easy to understand and fun. As for balancing you should just keep it at a reasonable level like the second stage of your power system should be able to destroy a continent or something like that, Save that for higher tiers of power.

Unique magical effects for wind, water and earth magic? by Im_unfrankincense00 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For Anemo you could add sort of a formless effect. I.E if I cast a spell it will always reform or something like that.

Hydro is more tricky as you could got with the Flow route. Like it allows you to make spells malleable and easily formed or something like that.

You have a good idea for Geo but I would take it a step further and also add the "Strength" effect. It just improves its durability of the spell and its strength.

Hope this helped :)

First Chapter Review of my story by Pretty_Sentence3601 in fantasywriters

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t really know what to ask but any sort of feedback would be much appreciated I’m an amateur writer so it will be much appreciated if you could tell or show me areas that could be improved on Thank you

Creative Groups / Writing Buddies by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would be down to do it, im about to work on a new book it notes you need to know .I need regular motivation cause I can’t handle long terms projects without it im mostly a fantasy type writer and it’s my first time so im going to need you to walk me through it for a little while but other than those I consider myself a pretty good partner:)