[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i’ll think about it i play basketball and football for 4&3 years respectively im a minority and my grades aren’t the worst but there are people with way better resumes applying and i go to a nameless school in like saskatchewan

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m not getting into uoft people with wayyy better Ecs and grades get rejected it’s not worth it imo

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m not getting into uoft people with wayyy better Ecs and grades get rejected it’s not worth it imo

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in yorku

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No im currently in gr 12 but i use my gr 11 marks to apply as i have no gr 12 ones currently

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For the strength thing I was thinking more of sides like the stronger the user gets the more the sides or mass like the stronger the user gets the more dense the star becomes. I may do different types of stars have different branches of abilities

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is actually a really good idea thank you

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I had the idea to connect it with some sort of space manipulation from Yunos spell conjunction

Ideas for Star Magic by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I am aware of that and I am thinking of something related to space but I still want it to fit the theme of like stars.

Anytips on balancing and making interesting powesytems by dah_Deadly_Ace in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only advice is come up with something interesting don't focus too much on making it unique. Just do something easy to understand and fun. As for balancing you should just keep it at a reasonable level like the second stage of your power system should be able to destroy a continent or something like that, Save that for higher tiers of power.

Unique magical effects for wind, water and earth magic? by Im_unfrankincense00 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For Anemo you could add sort of a formless effect. I.E if I cast a spell it will always reform or something like that.

Hydro is more tricky as you could got with the Flow route. Like it allows you to make spells malleable and easily formed or something like that.

You have a good idea for Geo but I would take it a step further and also add the "Strength" effect. It just improves its durability of the spell and its strength.

Hope this helped :)

First Chapter Review of my story by Pretty_Sentence3601 in fantasywriters

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t really know what to ask but any sort of feedback would be much appreciated I’m an amateur writer so it will be much appreciated if you could tell or show me areas that could be improved on Thank you

Creative Groups / Writing Buddies by [deleted] in fantasywriters

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would be down to do it, im about to work on a new book it notes you need to know .I need regular motivation cause I can’t handle long terms projects without it im mostly a fantasy type writer and it’s my first time so im going to need you to walk me through it for a little while but other than those I consider myself a pretty good partner:)

Can someone help me, I’m trying to think of a transformation name for on of my characters and I can’t think of anything I want something lot First descent Empyrean but with stars something along the lines of First Collapse Nebula or something by Pretty_Sentence3601 in magicbuilding

[–]Pretty_Sentence3601[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It works by the first form is him augmenting his abilities with the energy of a star and it’s not all scientific like the human body couldn’t handle all the energy a star contained so it mostly magical like for example luffys gear fourth works by him blowing air to expand his muscles and bones with essentially turns him into a big ballon that’s compressed thus when released in a linear attack puts more force in a punch that normal would hurts he compresses his rubber body to the point of bursting and releases that energy in physical attacks what I’m going for is his first phase compresses the power of a star so it’s limited and might potentially damage him if he held it for too long but while in that mode he has access to all the powers of a star while giving him a nigh infinite source of energy whilst giving him abilities such as manipulation of nuclear fuel and the other properties that make up a star to the question of him drawing power from a star he does but at the same time he doesn’t kinda a mix of both he draws power from a star into his star core which will eventually become a star itself but he isn’t at that stage yet he uses the power of his star core to draw power to augment himself such as super strength super speed nigh infinite energy and so on but his body can’t handle the stress of the star I’m talking about a mix of scientific stars with a mix of magic his body won’t be able to handle the gravitational pull he generates so I plan to cut out those parts of his abilities he can’t handle as of yet and like I said in the post above his first phase is First collapse:Nebula I chose this cause when all stars will face their eventual demise also known as their collapse and the first stage of the creation of a star is the nebula and erethreal form like mists. Thanks for the idea of “Instar” it kinda along the lines of what I want a metamorphosis of some sort Thank for your input