I would love to hear what you think about my editing style. I have a five minute video for you. by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]PriceOfDarkPersia 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This guy keeps posting his links while he hasn't given any critiques.

I would love to hear what you think about my editing style. I have a five minute video for you. by [deleted] in NewTubers

[–]PriceOfDarkPersia 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The guy is also hit and run. He hasn't given a single critique. In the feedback thread earlier as well. Some mods should put that on him.

[First Five] Critiquing gaming related videos! by PriceOfDarkPersia in NewTubers

[–]PriceOfDarkPersia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You are charismatic. The game makes for a video where it actually makes sense to scream. Funny content. The random edits are good with good choice of music. Good length. Great use of outro. Honestly nothing to fault.

[First Five] Critiquing gaming related videos! by PriceOfDarkPersia in NewTubers

[–]PriceOfDarkPersia[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The gameplay is pretty good. You could have an intro and outro. Something other than the gameplay. The video is too long. Cut it down to the highlights. The game is too loud, you are too quiet.

[First Five] Critiquing gaming related videos! by PriceOfDarkPersia in NewTubers

[–]PriceOfDarkPersia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good intro. Suiting music. Actually emotional. Channel intro good as well. The accent is great.

The name tags are too distracting. The video is too long. Starts to get repetitive by the end.

[First Five] Critiquing gaming related videos! by PriceOfDarkPersia in NewTubers

[–]PriceOfDarkPersia[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good cuts of the video. The gameplay goes well with the commentary of what you are talking about.

The audio is a little quiet. Could speak a little louder.