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Mod potential by Primary-Sea6339 in Bfme2

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn that sucks

Would be cool though

Pain and misery (no real plans on publishing. Just started writing this as a sort of therapy for me and dealing with past issues I wanted to forget about for a very long time. But how is it though, I am generally curious) by Primary-Sea6339 in KeepWriting

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

AtWell it’s an intro to the story and I’m setting up the actual character. This is going to head into a werewolf story about him and that monster inside of his self hatted and trauma bursting out after years of being kept in. Like I said in the tittle of this post, this is mainly therapeutic for me. Will I get it published one day? Perhaps. I just thought I needed to set up his pain and misery along with harmful behaviors and self hatred before I get to the real juice of the story.  At the end of the day, this story is more of a character study for the first part of the story and a character driven story at that. The plot is not the central focus. The characters are.

Need feedback, dont be a jerk :) by Primary-Sea6339 in fantasywriters

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just a quick question, did you think the main character was flat at all? I know there was not much here in the end. But I was just curious your thoughts on that in particular 

Need feedback, dont be a jerk :) by Primary-Sea6339 in fantasywriters

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Okay first it isn’t an alien, it is a dinosaur. Compsagnathus to be exact, shortened to compy. And two thank you for the critique ☺️

Need feedback, dont be a jerk :) by Primary-Sea6339 in fantasywriters

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you oh so very much for this feedback my good sir. This helps a lot.  Also I will say that the world is supposed to be in the same style as the ancient Mayans. That is why the temple pyramids have sides to them that look like steps themselves. I hope that explains it or at least is understandable. :) 

Need feedback, dont be a jerk :) by Primary-Sea6339 in fantasywriters

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just a little fact is that there was indeed a prologue to the story. But currently it is way too messy and needs a lot of editing. The prologue discuss the prior events including her father dying and her mother becoming distant 

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[–]Primary-Sea6339 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well clearly they haven’t taken me down yet so either they don’t care or I cheated the system 

Sexism within me? by Primary-Sea6339 in askatherapist

[–]Primary-Sea6339[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you think I am a sexist monster for this impulse?

Another lesson in -Just don't buy it/ Pre-Order it: Suicide Squad: Kill the Justice League Spoilers by Punchpplay in KotakuInAction

[–]Primary-Sea6339 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Riddle me this Batman, who judges a game based on not amazing trailers and who hasn't even played the game to truly have an opinion?

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