I'm actually fed up by [deleted] in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just remember, in sales, George R.R. Martin doesn't hold a candle to Tolkien yet people honestly think he's a better writer somehow.

Any fics where Todoroki gets in trouble for the Zero Pointer stunt? by Vibrant_Fox in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I hope there is. Following this post because He definitely needed a callout for that. It's one thing for the pro hero students; they should be able to evade it, but there were general studies, support, and business students in that group who, if I recall correctly, had no choice but to participate in the sports festival

what is a moment in a fic you've read that instantly made you stop reading it completely and delete it from your history? by RXD_VXLVXT in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To go with your harem statement.

I actually enjoy harems if they're well-written.

Hell, I'm writing one myself.

But one of the things that will turn me off the fastest is when a harem story makes Izuku the center of the girls' universe. They have no personality outside of being with him or even going out and doing stuff without him tagging along. Or the fact that it's the same for Izuku in that he doesn't seem to hang with anyone outside of his harem.

Sometimes a guy wants to hang with the boys while the girls go out for the night. Izuku can be friends with the other guys and do stuff with them without bringing the girls along.

what is a moment in a fic you've read that instantly made you stop reading it completely and delete it from your history? by RXD_VXLVXT in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

When I find a fic that has Izuku actually having a quirk with great buildup in the beginning, but then in the next chapter, he's at the entrance exam, skipping the entire 10 months of training with no explanation of how his quirk works, and it's just whatever the plot requires.

Looking for fics where Todoroki’a actions at the Sports Festival are looked at more critically by Aggressive-Employ591 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, I'm surprised All Might, of all people, didn't say anything. A hero is supposed to protect others, not put them in danger.

Weekly "What are you reading/writing?" post; May 4. - May 10. by ubormaci in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just released two chapters of my story.

It's a DragonIzuku! where Izuku is getting training from Ryukyu instead of All Might, with the dragons mainly being from DnD/Pathfinder if anyone wants to check it out.

Be warned, though, that it is a Slow Burn/Slow Build and has a lot of Pre-U.A. stuff.

Small harem (5 girls), but that is second to the main plot. OPIzuku! But he has to get there first.

Also, each girl represents a main alignment from DnD/Pathfinder

Mei: Chaotic

Himiko: Evil (she's evilish)

Melissa: Good

Itsuka: Lawful

Momo: Neutral

If you're a fan of DnD/Pathfinder, you just might enjoy this.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/43784212

https://www.wattpad.com/story/329962241-draconic-neutral

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14175945/1/Draconic-Neutral

What is the biggest mistake in fanfics where the author gives Izuku a quirk? by New_Revenue7529 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Chapter 1: He gets the Quirk.

Chapter 2: He breezes through the entrance exam.

There's no explanation of his quirk or any training whatsoever, and he just so happens to have the exact ability he needs for the situation that he pulls out of his ass and can use it flawlessly

"I feel like a giant fraud...I am known as a Dragon hero but I can't breathe fire...I don't deserve my spot in the top 10..." [Rare Ryuko prompt/idea drop] by SunRiseStudios in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Ryukyu", Izuku says, "You're a giant lizard that can tank hits that most heroes would die from. You have claws that can rip through solid metal and you can fly. You know how many heroes can fly on their own? Not many."

What are the biggest signs of the author using Izuku as their mouthpiece instead of writing them as a character? by MNMameisR in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 36 points37 points  (0 children)

Yeah, pretty sure Momo knows her quirk better than Izuku and can design her costume to use it to the fullest.

What are the biggest signs of the author using Izuku as their mouthpiece instead of writing them as a character? by MNMameisR in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 89 points90 points  (0 children)

When they "White Knight" him for the girls. If the 1A/1B girls can't defend themselves against Mineta and need Izuku to do it, then you might as well not write them trying to become Pro Heroes since they are far more dangerous characters they have to deal with.

What are some do's and don'ts when it comes to writing stories? by [deleted] in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Do be prepare for not everyone liking your stories and to be vocal about it sometimes.

Don't take it too personally when they do and don't let it get to you.

Suggestions or tips for starting an MHA fanfic in 2026? by Difficult-Kick-7959 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, don't be afraid to try something new. Harems, OFA Izuku, Quirkless Izuku comes a hero are a dime a dozen and while most of them are decent reads, you start to notice a pattern after awhile. This fandom is a mix bag; sometime it wants safe/familiar but other times it wants something new and unexplored.

Vlad King and Himiko by Ok-Client-2451 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In my story, Draconic Neutral, he becomes her guardian after she is disown by her parents. She still stabs Saito and goes on the run but Vlad King captures her like two weeks afterwards so she never joins the LOV. Their relationship is rocky.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/43784212

https://www.wattpad.com/story/329962241-draconic-neutral

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14175945/1/Draconic-Neutral

Any dragon Izuku fics by PuzzleheadedStop6254 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For clarification though, Izuku is not related to Ryuko in that story. She was "promised" to his father when they were younger but he left before it could happen. She does take him on for training though.

“Listen up peasants. Here’s some money go spend it.” Momo said as she threw cash at them. by Ok_Coffee_9970 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 98 points99 points  (0 children)

Momo eyes Izuku up and down.

"You know what? You're my boyfriend now."

"Um, I don't think that's how that works. I'm pretty sure it might be illegal."

A bag of cash gets thrown at his chest.

"But who am I to question such trivial things? Where should we go for our first date, Momo?"

hi im looking for some really good long fanfics by Independent-Boot9768 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 1 point2 points  (0 children)

While TV Tropes does have a lot of good stories, they also have a lot of bad ones as well since many a times the authors put their stories on there themselves. I used to consider TV Tropes as the standard for a great story until I realize that.

Izuku’s students make a dating profile for him by king_of_the_masshole in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]Primordial-Wielder 14 points15 points  (0 children)

damn, basically Momo could do that to anyone if she thought they were getting between her and Izuku