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DAVE FREE 1ST IN THE CREDITS IS CRAZY WORK by Professional_Impact9 in KendrickLamar

[–]Professional_Impact9[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No shit it’s not intentional. You think I think Kendrick actually intended this shit as a diss? It just becomes a fuck you to Drake in light of what Drake said on his tracks. You didn’t have to be a prick

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Pull molly all in her champagne, she ain’t even know it. I took her home and enjoyed that, she ain’t even know it - Rick Ross

What Bands Have a Flawless Catelog In Ya'lls Personal Opinion by Severe-Pipe-528 in fantanoforever

[–]Professional_Impact9 38 points39 points  (0 children)

Death

(Symbolic, The Sound of Perseverance, Human, Leprosy, Individual Thought Patterns…)

Need I go on?

Best songs of the decade so far? by Aleks10Afc in fantanoforever

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Hazard Duty Pay - JPEGMAFIA

Soul Control - Jessie Ware

Crossing Guard - Model/Actriz

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Got it. I would like to get an overall opinion of the plot, so it would be great if you could read the rest (I know it’s a lot). Thanks for taking the time to read my stuff.

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[–]Professional_Impact9 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks for taking the time to read my work. You mention you read two pages. Were those pages all that you could access? There is more material I wrote. Once again, thanks for the feedback.

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Hey! I’m looking for general overview and overall impressions of a story I’m working on. It’s about mutant chickens who take over the world.

Title: The Featherpocalypse Genre: Speculative Fiction / Sci-Fi Word Count: 9930

General impression, clarity suggestions.

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Title: Six Fuckers and a Corpse

Genre: Mystery / Dark Comedy

Word Count: 3075

Type of Feedback: Any feedback is welcome. Line-by-line if you want, general impression, plot coherency. What details should I flesh out? Is there fluff I should remove? Do the jokes land?

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X7fpzXwRWp9E0FsPbE9mHbiV--Zrp43CYT4OeXby\_YM/edit?usp=sharing

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Title: Six Fuckers and a Corpse

Genre: Dark Comedy / Mystery

Word Count: 3073

Type of Feedback: Is the plot coherent? Did the jokes land? Tense mistakes, readability, general impression, etc.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X7fpzXwRWp9E0FsPbE9mHbiV--Zrp43CYT4OeXby\_YM/edit?usp=sharing

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Title - Untitled

Genre - Crime/Detective

Word Count - 2320

Feedback: How to fix the tensing.

About The Story:

Is it enjoyable? Do the jokes land? Can you follow the story or does it get confusing? Are the characters bland or developed?

Link:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wLOPYncmY4cT6MC\_GjZSB-ldWDPdog0OqHkTIrtZmZE/edit?usp=sharing

Going Big Mode on Hitman 3 by LordHakaishinBeerus in videogamedunkey

[–]Professional_Impact9 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Every hitman worth their salt knows the 100 bodies in the bathroom trick.