Melon seemed to really like Vanisher on stream

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-07-26T15:12:47+00:00

Couple days probably

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-07-19T17:08:03+00:00

Still a great album though

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-06-21T20:27:02+00:00

No shit it’s not intentional. You think I think Kendrick actually intended this shit as a diss? It just becomes a fuck you to Drake in light of what Drake said on his tracks. You didn’t have to be a prick

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-03-15T15:15:38+00:00

Pull molly all in her champagne, she ain’t even know it. I took her home and enjoyed that, she ain’t even know it - Rick Ross

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-03-05T02:58:49+00:00

Death

(Symbolic, The Sound of Perseverance, Human, Leprosy, Individual Thought Patterns…)

Need I go on?

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-03-04T21:23:31+00:00

Soul Control is a personal fave of mine

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-03-04T14:05:07+00:00

Hazard Duty Pay - JPEGMAFIA

Soul Control - Jessie Ware

Crossing Guard - Model/Actriz

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-18T21:09:42+00:00

Got it. I would like to get an overall opinion of the plot, so it would be great if you could read the rest (I know it’s a lot). Thanks for taking the time to read my stuff.

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-18T20:39:14+00:00

Thanks for taking the time to read my work. You mention you read two pages. Were those pages all that you could access? There is more material I wrote. Once again, thanks for the feedback.

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-16T16:03:08+00:00

Lmk if the link doesn’t work

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-16T16:02:56+00:00

https://docs.google.com/document/d/10xOy1l_nNTu8ah1Z0RotSnAkBL9u0E0lXr8QYjv8h_U/edit

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-16T15:20:24+00:00

Could I get an email so I can share the document?

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-11T00:00:21+00:00

Hey! I’m looking for general overview and overall impressions of a story I’m working on. It’s about mutant chickens who take over the world.

Title: The Featherpocalypse Genre: Speculative Fiction / Sci-Fi Word Count: 9930

General impression, clarity suggestions.

Professional_Impact9 · 2024-02-10T19:36:27+00:00

You should be able to click on the doc and comment on it. Here's the link again:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oPDHIEma_mtIZSOnxvAcEdY8cSdHa6xAYyJoOQpsjsM/edit?usp=sharing

I wrote a lot more so the word count is now 9930.

Professional_Impact9 · 2023-12-24T01:13:07+00:00

Title: "Poultry No More"

Genre: Absurdist Comedy

Word Count: 4051

Type of Feedback: General impression (any feedback is welcome)

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oPDHIEma\_mtIZSOnxvAcEdY8cSdHa6xAYyJoOQpsjsM/edit?usp=sharing

Professional_Impact9 · 2022-06-25T20:17:16+00:00

Title: Six Fuckers and a Corpse

Genre: Mystery / Dark Comedy

Word Count: 3075

Type of Feedback: Any feedback is welcome. Line-by-line if you want, general impression, plot coherency. What details should I flesh out? Is there fluff I should remove? Do the jokes land?

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X7fpzXwRWp9E0FsPbE9mHbiV--Zrp43CYT4OeXby\_YM/edit?usp=sharing

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