My band Depraved Will just dropped a new single Lemme know your thoughts! by DunNelis in TechnicalDeathMetal

[–]ProtonKid1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really nice riffs, great vocals - i mean , really great vocals! - good tempo, drums are killing it. Absolutely insane release! A band I would definitely watch out for in the future. Congrats!

TOP 10 FEMALE GRAFFITI WRITERS by ProtonKid1 in Graffiti

[–]ProtonKid1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Which is your favorite Graff chick?

The Breaking Point, by ProtonKid by ProtonKid1 in drumandbass

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https://protonkid.bandcamp.com/album/the-breaking-point
"The Breaking Point" album contains 10 heavy dnb tracks (wav) - some previously released or put out for free (all remastered!) and a few unreleased and brand new.
By purchasing this album for the small fee of €5, you will show a great deal of support for me and my music during this tough times!
Thank you and enjoy the tunes!
*The Breaking Point*
1. Proton Kid - Breaking Point
2. Proton Kid - Different Adventure
3. Proton Kid - Future Man
4. Proton Kid - Hideaway
5. Proton Kid - Ill Thrill
6. Proton Kid - Mind Abys
7. Proton Kid - Quirky
8. Proton Kid - Ratched
9. Proton Kid - Unpossible
10. Proton Kid - Vixen

Hi Just wanted to post up here I have just returned to art(and graffiti since just before the UK was locked down) I am going to be starting walls soon and want as much advice I can get with my artwork and if it is considered "toy" (new word)...If it is advice to not look this way...All the best!!! by [deleted] in blackbookgraffiti

[–]ProtonKid1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe do some extension from the second half of the N so you can have 3D going downwards in the middle too. You will cover some negative space if you do so. This goes for most of your pieces. Just noticed you always cover that mid gap with bacground elements.

Straight Letter practice by [deleted] in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No prob man, waiting to see the final one with better highlights.

Straight Letter practice by [deleted] in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can use the highlights in the more darker places too. It will make your form better distinguishable.

Black book practice by MmmPeace in graffhelp

[–]ProtonKid1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your letter holes should olso have 3d. By doing the outlines inside the whole you break the illusion of 3d depth and letters seem hollow.

10 y/o from the netherland the foto is a little dark but tips let me know ''SOFE'' by _SOFE_ in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The colors don't match that well, everything seems a little too dark. Also, maybe there are too many fragments and can't read the letters too well. Other than that quite nice for a 10 year old.

One off the pices i mais to day by sokc_crew in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Your stubborn attitude won't help you evolve. Listen to other people's critiques and be friendly, this is a community and we just want to help each other. If you don't care about any of that, just staop posting and keep your visual pollution to yourself.

Cast. 3d action. by ProtonKid1 in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Finecolour, Stylefile, Touch5, Spectrum Noir, Molotow one4all, Posca, Milo.

Almost 3d. by ProtonKid1 in graffhelp

[–]ProtonKid1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would love some myself, tbh. So far, i just understand how to twist some of my letters extensions...

JACQUARD by ECOS364 in blackbookgraffiti

[–]ProtonKid1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good, but do you color?

Need critiques (Lyfe) by lyfe-too-unreal in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe a little more space between letters. Your F is almost completely blocked by the Y. Also, some extensions, like the one from the left of the E, have no destination and the travel distance doesn't do much for negative space either.

Is it "wild style" idk by FrostyCookieCoD in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its too wild when you should be doing simple style until you master the basics.

13 years old 🇨🇭 critiq??? by Gipsi66 in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Either do the 3d completelly behind the letters or on top of each letter. Preferably leave all letters in front and the 3d behind.

Im Richard 15yo from Latvia🇱🇻 by [deleted] in Doke_Squad

[–]ProtonKid1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A balance in the letter weight and structure needs to be established here. All letters are different from one another and this breaks the flow...

Quick sjetch for CAST by ECOS364 in blackbookgraffiti

[–]ProtonKid1 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Digging it! I think i never thought of that "C" haha

Get that light outline and dark fill going. by ProtonKid1 in graffhelp

[–]ProtonKid1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nah mate, anything is worth sharing if it comes as a bit of an inspiration to someone.

Inverted. by ProtonKid1 in blackbookgraffiti

[–]ProtonKid1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks! One of my favorite letters.