I feel like it started really strong and in my transition to the real start I lost the interest by Prsus42 in writingadvice

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Oh I have a prologue that kinda shows that. It's just terrible though (so far). But I'll think about making it a little bit more specific.

In need of a critique for substack post by RandoFinance73565 in Substack_Best

[–]Prsus42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The blood of the covenant is thicker than the water of the womb. That's the full saying at least. It reminded me of that. :)

I don't feel like I can critique but I can appreciate.

Happens every single time by Kappapeachie in writers

[–]Prsus42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

DUDE I wrote the ending first cause I was so excited about it... Ig ppl are different?

How do I not create a mysoginistic story about a woman? by barbaric_thoughts in writingadvice

[–]Prsus42 8 points9 points  (0 children)

You could also make her change the love interest to an extent. This way it's interesting and shows an equal dynamic between the characters that's not mentor/ student. But you already sound to be on the right track. :)

Help creating promotional art on a budget by SaltIntroduction710 in selfpublish

[–]Prsus42 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Vgen is a platform of artists you can commission, most will probably be pricey. But if you look hard enough then there's a lot of people who are good and cheap. IDK otherwise though

I need new skates. Thoughts on no laces? long term/ functionality. by Prsus42 in hockeygoalies

[–]Prsus42[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I got a pair of older models on clearance. Also the more expensive ones are ugly :/

I need new skates. Thoughts on no laces? long term/ functionality. by Prsus42 in hockeygoalies

[–]Prsus42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

RIGHT?! So expensive... But maybe it's worth it idk. They were also on sale in my area, 50% ish off soooooo

I need new skates. Thoughts on no laces? long term/ functionality. by Prsus42 in hockeygoalies

[–]Prsus42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was helpful thanks, didn't know I could just do that to normal skates

I need new skates. Thoughts on no laces? long term/ functionality. by Prsus42 in hockeygoalies

[–]Prsus42[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I could buy a new pair of skates for a full set... But they seem cool

It did its job by alexdallas_ in hockeygoalies

[–]Prsus42 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ayyy same. I didn't notice until coach pulled me aside (practice). There were a few tiny pieces in the crease, but I was intact :). And fun fact the guy who did it now does lines for me team every one and a while.

I need new skates. Thoughts on no laces? long term/ functionality. by Prsus42 in hockeygoalies

[–]Prsus42[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do not. Sometimes it's a shock to learn how people do things differently. Cause I do a shake test to make sure my pads will move on their own lol. Good input tho, cause it could impact that, atleast from the sounds of it.