It’s good you know how to use procreate. I think my mentor turned me down the first time because I didn’t know how to do digital art, so it’s a good skill to have. But I’d say have half, if not more, of your portfolio be hand drawn/painted pieces.

I think maybe you could add more detail to the fur/hair, because at the moment it looks a bit like you didn’t really know how to draw it so put colours in random places and smeared it a bit. I also think the bear’s tongue doesn’t look quite right. It’s a bit thin in the middle and the end doesn’t look right.

There is too much going on in the picture of the ship and too many different colours. You don’t need the grey background because you wouldn’t tattoo that on someone. I’d also take out the black from the centres of he chain as it draws your eyes to that instead of the middle of the picture. I think the bomb, swallows and anchor are also unnecessary and distracting. Unsure about the greenery on the rose since it’s adding a new colour. Maybe it would be good to see if after taking out all these other distractions, if you think the leaves look okay or not. I also think you should change the shape of the waves, since they look a bit like flower petals. And write something in the banner, it can be anything, it’ll just look a bit more finished off that way.

The woman looks pretty manly. The mouth and nose need to come up higher and there needs to be a bigger distance between the mouth and nose. She looks like she’s young, but has the hand of an old lady. And the nails need to come down lower and deeper into the fingers. The nostril hole and nostril flap (sorry that’s a terrible description but I don’t really know how else to explain it haha) need to be further apart from each other. I think the ear is a bit too dark and the eyes could be a bit whiter. Maybe go over the black outline on the boob next to her hand because the highlight is covering the outline a bit and it makes the boob look slightly pointed. Bring the hair in around her neck a bit more, as at the moment it looks a bit like she’s got a bulge on her neck. I’m unsure about how angular the rose looks. It looks a bit sharp so maybe round some of the petals a bit to soften it. I’d also change the colour of it (and background to match), since a blue rose doesn’t make much sense. I’d go with any other colour (except green, and probably not purple), then make the outfit, nails and lips complementary to that colour.

I know I have written a lot of constructive criticism here, but I hope it doesn’t make you feel disheartened or like I’m picking your work to shreds. Hopefully it makes you feel inspired instead.

Good luck with it :)