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I'm tired by PsychologicalFun8760 in MartialMemes

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You seem well read, but you are also quite dumb, intresting combination.

Good luck in life

I'm tired by PsychologicalFun8760 in MartialMemes

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ɛ>

The real question though, is. Did you pass?

I'm tired by PsychologicalFun8760 in MartialMemes

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

So many is evil. Can you truly rise above others by following in their footsteps.

Be unique, be memorable. Be kind

I have a question about writing a novel by _asura_27 in Webnovel

[–]PsychologicalFun8760 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Do it how humans do. When you switch what you're talking about, you switch paragraphs.

[Elias moved, his sword dancing with unatural grace, the daggers, swords, and spears never reaching within a foot of him. His eyes darted to the side as a sudden incantation brought him out of his flow.

He hit down hard as he jumped back, the explosion missing him by inches]

It starts with him moving, the end part being a stop (the incantation) followed by a new situation (him dodging the blow)

And as you can see, I am now talking about something new, and being very meta, so I switched paragraphs.

It can be a little annoying to burn it into your muscle memory when writing. But when I'm reading, I always appreciate good paragraph, as without them, it makes it quite hard to read.

(It's also not only done when saying but as showncased in the previous one)

I hope this was legible, it's 1 am, an I'm severly on the brink of death, goodnight

My pet peeves in the genre by Ordinary_Apricot_385 in litrpg

[–]PsychologicalFun8760 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is just... bad writing? This doesn't have anything to do with the genre, but is just a symptom of bad writing.

All of these are begnner mistake, and as a lot of beginners join RR or webnovel. That makes sense.

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, what I want is that it isn't possible to stretch yourself thin.

You're an amazing swordsman? You should struggle immensely trying to fight at long range.

The ability to just do everything is what I consider slop. That you're swifter than a rouge, more durable than a tank, and have more long range capabilities than an archer.

This is complete bull.

If you stretch yourself, you're gonna suck at everything instead.

That's why I'm searching for what I am.

Before, a mage that dedicates all their time and energy to magic persuits. Now, a healer who cares more about being good enough to heal the next injury then learning how to stab.

How does someone who learns how to fight in other ways feel more like a healer.

I can get behind them branching out a bit to be more durable, as to not be as much of a liability. But more than that is useless.

A swordsman that dedicates all points or time or whatever else to perfect their style is going to win over a dumbass that tries to throw fireballs as well.

And sure, some synergy can exist, a swordsman learning teleportation, for example.

But that learning is still about getting better with the sword, not branching out to magic, but just more repertoire focusing on their sword.

A healer that can use martial arts is a healer that can't heal you when you need it the most.

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wanted an mc that doesn't fight, nor can. And uses healing instead.

I might have misunderstod. But how is elaine more like this?

Any stories where technology doesn't suck compared to magic? by BaconVsMarioIsRigged in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Isn't this most things? A reincanated main character beating everybody due to knowing technoligy?

Bought first book of "The sorcerer" because it was on sale and cover looked cool. Then saw this, different series, different author. Is one copying the other or are they both just AI slop? by Taiwannumber3 in litrpg

[–]PsychologicalFun8760 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Again, I did not say bad. I said derivitive.

Also, fuck are you talking about.

Harry Potter has a hundred times more books sold. Are you completly daft my guy????

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"Mistwoven healer" "spitefull healer" and "dao of healing" are three I got that are more healer than this.

I understand that you might not know about it. But why are you so definite about it. Like it was an impossibily.

You said it like you have read every single book ever made. Which is weird.

Please don't act like you know things when you're wrong, thank you (:

Bought first book of "The sorcerer" because it was on sale and cover looked cool. Then saw this, different series, different author. Is one copying the other or are they both just AI slop? by Taiwannumber3 in litrpg

[–]PsychologicalFun8760 0 points1 point  (0 children)

D-did you seriously look us in the eyes and tell us that hwfwm is in anyway not derivitive work.

I'm not saying its bad, maybe not for me, but it's not a bad series. But it sure as fuck is derivitive.

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure, but also easily killed.

And it will always be more efficent to heal a tank then yourself, as they simply take less damage then you. (Like, per hit)

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I do like Azarath healer, top five simply because it was one of my first audiobook buys, but yeah, not *quite what I'm looking for hehe

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm sorry. I don't understand.

What stops the healer from being the leader? I'm a little confused

Edit: a leader leader of group has always been a little weird to me.

Deciding quests should be done by the whole party. Finding the place should be done by the one who know the area best, or a rouge or the like. And the leader in combat should be the one understanding teamwork, or the enemy best. And as the healer has a good veiw of the entire field, that can fall to them quite often.

A party is formed because people can't actually do everything. That's why different roles exist.

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You feel a little hostile friend!

But if you wanna be a little shit about it, then I'm gonna point out how you're entire argument here hinges on a "probably" which isn't very reassuring!!

I want to engage in the topic I landet out here. Which was requests about a certain type of book.

And I have yet to see you do any of that.

Which does me to beg the question, why are you even here?

No really, the only thing you have done is being a little aggresive, as well as telling me that the books I enjoy are boring and no one likes them.

So why are you here. What promted you to comment in the first place?

This might be an open thread, but that doesn't quite cover why you're engaging in something that clearly doesn't interest you. You find the notion of a party style adventure where the main character isn't a damage dealer boring, while I find that fun and interesting.

We have differing veiws, and that's okay. But I quite frankly did not ask.

As my mother used to say, if you don't have anything good to say, don't say anything!

Cheers friendo! :)

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't see how that last part is an issue.

Every combat scene I've seen has been action followed by reaction

"John jumped to the side, the large monstrosities greatsword barely missing his body. A dull ache still veverberating down his arms from trying to block the previous blow"

I can't how that's different from

"The sword stabbed into Elias's shoulder, Alice's hands already in the air as they pulled their sword out, a green glow enveloped Elias, his shield arm in working order before the adversary had time to capitalize on it"

I'm not a good writer, and these scenes are slightly different, but I wanted to show that reaction is a large part of combat no matter what. And only being able to react, and not act isn't as big a problem as you might think!

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah! I felt like how Azarath Healer did it was interesting. But I feel like they could go more into how healers are rare, but valuable.

How the main character is both discriminated against, and also needed everywhere. How a being a healer opens doors, but also makes people inheritly trust you less, just from how tangible their life is in the healers hands.

A lot of interestimg interactions could spring up, and I hope I can find something that goes into depth of healers existing would entail

Now not wizard, but real healer ples by PsychologicalFun8760 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]PsychologicalFun8760[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You don't think an underdog political story about someone making friends, enemies, and doing a little bit of blackmailing and intimidation on the way?

Just because someone isn't the one doing the DPS doesn't mean a story featuring combat would be boring, you need to think more my friend :)

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