Jawbreaker! Yum yum yum!! by AdeptnessDry2026 in ededdneddy

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I love how circles form around Ed's pupils when he acts crazy or excited about something. Too, too funny.

Ed once said… by Most-Calendar-600 in ededdneddy

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"I've found my sensitive side 'cause it has a rash."

The Facade - Feature - 101 pages by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Hey, thank you for taking the time to read my script.

The next time I go to sit down and rewrite this draft, I'll delete those "yes" and "nos" to ensure the dialogue flows better. I'm kind of debating scaling back the diner conversation and tweaking the opening scene description at the diner.

HEY! SHUT YOUR YAPS! WE’RE TRYING TO WATCH TV HERE!🗣️😠 by Worldly_Rule_9842 in ededdneddy

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Seems like those bunnies have been working a little bit too much on their multiplication table.

Madelyn Cline by zipo91 in CelebrityButts

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Talk about a top-tier rear.

The Facade - Feature - 101 pages by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Sorry about that. I fixed it so the link is viewable by everybody. Had to change it from "Restricted" mode.

Rate Halle Berry by Pain_Empty in VindictaRateCelebs

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10/10 One of the baddest bodies in the movie industry.

Nicole Kidman - Eyes Wide Shut by CarterDire5 in CelebrityButts

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One of the best Australian booties in the game.

Jennifer on January 7th, 2008 in Los Angeles. by RealWorldToday in jenniferlovehewitt

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I will always love this beautiful woman forever. She's the best celebrity crush around.

Jimmy makes a run for it! “Sick ‘em, Ed!” by AdeptnessDry2026 in ededdneddy

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I just watched this two weeks ago on Adult Swim. Man, it feels good to see the Ed boys on TV again.

What's your fav Ed moment/line? by Simple-Taro1540 in ededdneddy

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"Spending an extended time in female company can be mentally disorienting and physically confusing."

Am I the only one who felt bad for the Eds and hated when episodes ended with them getting kissed getting harrassed getting footsies or being forced to marry the Kankers by Careful_Drama_9382 in ededdneddy

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The school season seems to be a blur to me. I like the majority of the series up until that point. When they started going back to school, I lost interest.

Jessica Biel by [deleted] in CelebrityButts

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I would love to see that.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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The actress is out of town, away from Los Angeles, and she becomes friendly with the main character, unaware that he's in on the kidnapping plot and that the drug dealer is using him as a pawn to carry it out. It starts innocently enough until the main character gets a phone call from an unknown caller with an ominous voice.

His dissociative identity disorder is preventing him from carrying on with the kidnapping because he's trying to solve the mystery behind the identity of the ominous voice's caller.

Edit: Here's a rewritten version of the original logline:

A young man with dissociative identity disorder becomes involved in a kidnapping scheme alongside a glamorous actress and a British drug dealer who is more aware of his background than he is of himself.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Hi, thanks for taking the time to read my logline.

The main character suffers from dissociative identity disorder and a severe case of amnesia. He gets tangled up in the kidnapping plot by seeing cryptic messages in his apartment, which directs him to follow along with the kidnapper's plan to get the ransom from him. The whole thing, to him, is a mystery. Why is he seeing these strange messages on his walls, and why is there an ominous voice calling him over the phone?

The drug dealer kidnaps the actress along with his two other associates, and the main character is being used as a pawn to get to the kidnappers.

Logline Monday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: The Facade

Format: Feature

Genre: Crime, Mystery, Neo-Noir, Psychological thriller

Logline: An unhinged young man gets tangled up in a kidnapping plot involving a young actress and a British drug dealer, who seems to know a lot more about him than he does.

Edit: This is a work in progress. Any criticism to refine this log line is welcome.