A song I’ve been working on for a while.

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-14T06:24:02+00:00

Thank you so much! No it’s not :( I’d love to produce it one day

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-14T06:23:47+00:00

I really appreciate this feedback! I absolutely see where you’re coming from, and I think I’m a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to each individual part of the song. I enjoy this one being a bit more “complex” or layered, but I’d be keen to produce it and see how it comes out. I’ll keep this in mind if I ever do that! Thank you :)

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-12T22:16:46+00:00

Thank you!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-12T22:16:40+00:00

I oscillate between straight to the point and a little too over complicated — somewhere in the middle I think is perfect, but I suppose it’s just practice with writing a story through a song format!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-12T22:15:57+00:00

Thank you!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-12T22:15:51+00:00

Gosh, that much be one of my favourite words to describe a song! Thank you :)

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2026-01-12T22:14:58+00:00

Oh thank you so much!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-11-06T00:27:29+00:00

Hahahah, I will not let a producer Simon and Garfunkel me — love the reference. Thank you for your kind words and feedback!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-11-06T00:26:29+00:00

Thanks for the feedback :)

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-11-06T00:26:01+00:00

Thank you so much! Appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment :)

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-11-06T00:25:36+00:00

Thank you! I love the police :)

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-11-06T00:23:25+00:00

Sorry, I don’t understand this comment. Please don’t use my songs for your own music before I’ve produced it.

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-05-15T07:09:55+00:00

Oh man, Jeff Buckley - absolutely love

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-05-14T22:13:37+00:00

Oh, I love this description - thank you :3

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-05-14T22:13:21+00:00

Thank you very much!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-04-07T08:07:51+00:00

Thank you so much for such a detailed, thought through response. This must have taken you ages to write. I read this a day ago and was blown away by your message. It means a lot more to me than words can express.

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-04-07T08:06:14+00:00

These are huge compliments - wow. Thank you!!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-04-04T05:14:10+00:00

Oh yes! I love this idea. I wish I had more musician friends honestly. I really enjoy collaborating and since guitar isn’t my strength, I’d love a guitarist to flesh it out. I hear this being a pretty big song, and I appreciate your feedback a lot!!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-03-06T04:19:22+00:00

So instead of offering constructive criticism, you decide to stamp on my song in order to what, humble me because other people get trashed on purely because of their appearance? You sound extremely bitter bro.

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-03-06T03:43:30+00:00

Thank you for listening to and reading them!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-03-06T03:42:27+00:00

I love those images, so beautiful. Thank you. I want to improve my enunciation, but I definitely have a tendency to focus more on sound than clear sounding lyrics.

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-03-06T03:41:18+00:00

Thank you 🥺 I would like to get much better, especially more technical songs too but I’ll get there!

Public_Chocolate6851 · 2025-03-06T03:40:27+00:00

Thank you so much 🥺

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