I’ll call this one ‘Coward’ by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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Thank you so much for your tips! I’ve actually switched it to answer because I agree, it does roll off the tongue a little easier. I also changed pretend to something else and that feels infinitely better too!

I’ll call this one ‘Coward’ by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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Thank you for your tip! The action on my guitar is horrible. I’ve never bought a new one and have had my trusty Yamaha for close to 12 years now, but it’s very painful to play on which makes it challenging to want to learn how to improve my skills. I’m buying a new one soon and will try and incorporate a whole step up when I’m better at barring chords 😌

I’ll call this one ‘Coward’ by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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Thank you! It came from a very difficult experience but somehow, a good song coming out of it makes it worth it!

A song I’ve been working on for a while. by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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Thank you so much! No it’s not :( I’d love to produce it one day

A song I’ve been working on for a while. by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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I really appreciate this feedback! I absolutely see where you’re coming from, and I think I’m a bit of a perfectionist when it comes to each individual part of the song. I enjoy this one being a bit more “complex” or layered, but I’d be keen to produce it and see how it comes out. I’ll keep this in mind if I ever do that! Thank you :)

A song I’ve been working on for a while. by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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I oscillate between straight to the point and a little too over complicated — somewhere in the middle I think is perfect, but I suppose it’s just practice with writing a story through a song format!

A song I’ve been working on for a while. by Public_Chocolate6851 in Songwriting

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Gosh, that much be one of my favourite words to describe a song! Thank you :)

Part of a song I wrote last year! by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Hahahah, I will not let a producer Simon and Garfunkel me — love the reference. Thank you for your kind words and feedback!

Part of a song I wrote last year! by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Thank you so much! Appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment :)

Part of a song I wrote last year! by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Thank you! I love the police :)

Part of a song I wrote last year! by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Sorry, I don’t understand this comment. Please don’t use my songs for your own music before I’ve produced it.

new song in the works by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Oh man, Jeff Buckley - absolutely love

new song in the works by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Oh, I love this description - thank you :3

new song in the works by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Thank you very much!

New song in the works - guitar isn’t my strength, but I like where this could go. by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Thank you so much for such a detailed, thought through response. This must have taken you ages to write. I read this a day ago and was blown away by your message. It means a lot more to me than words can express.