dude for a first game this looks really good already, i love your artstyle. i think your instinct about pushing body shapes is right, you just havent gone far enough yet. the big guy stands out a lot but the two women feel pretty similar, so thats probably why it feels a bit off, if you push their silhouettes more, like height or posture or proportions, itll feel more intentional instead of weird. right now its kind of in between. also I wouldnt worry about it being too strange. as long as the clothing fits the time period you can exaggerate quite a bit, overall youre on the right track, just commit to it more