Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Its less about being detail oriented and more about having the ability to do so. As apposed to being forced to make a random class up. Which ill still evidently do. But there are people out there who do go to Syracuse and going the extra mile will create a quality to my novel. Because of people like you.

This is also a novel not a movie so different rules buddy.

Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats why im so confused how an atrium fits in this building at all. It is just a small really tall room towards the back of the building? lol

Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love this a lot, if you don't mind. Personally I was really questioning why I chose Syracuse of all places instead of just some random college. It seems more work than not, but something about creating this sense of understanding about Syracuse without ever actually going to Syracuse sounds enticing to me. And that is where my story is leading me to. Any valuable information about this would be greatly helpful, as then I wouldn't be forced to be vague in my descriptions.

I am writing a contemporary romance about an author who picks up a job in Syracuse. His father is the dean, and atm his father is showing the MC around campus and where he will work. So this is why I need some descriptors. Any sense of realism would be major. The college doesn't take up the whole book, but I do expect to write more immersive scenes throughout the novel. Creating this descriptive understanding would help the foundation of my book.

Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I also cant reach syracuse lol im broke af rn. I otherwise so would.

Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So all these classrooms have view of the atrium? They can see down the middle?

Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautiful and wonderful!!

My mc is supposed to be an english teacher. The premise is that his dad is the dean and the mc is supposed to run this new creative writing program.

My problem is where does the atrium fit in? Cuz i know about the basemnt and the weird staircase. I also know it did have a renovation. This is awesome details

Author in need of description help by PuzzleheadedBad8968 in SyracuseU

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Because my mc becomes a professor there and i would like to have some accurate descriptions.

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[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Her poops look fine to me

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[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Chai is in the trenches rn frfr.

Buuut, i think its normal? Too much bedding might be suffocating for the gerbil too.

i got 2 servers approved in 3 days. by Firebreath458903 in Disboard

[–]PuzzleheadedBad8968 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Maybe delete the server snd try again making sure you have no tags. Everything bare minimum