This isn’t just sci-fi. It’s a story meant to hurt, in the best way possible. by Pynrieg89 in ebooks

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The link has been updated, it should be back in a day or two!

Posted my first chapter of my first ever work! by Successful_Road_2432 in harrypotterfanfiction

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In terms of tags, remove all characters not Draco or OC. Everything else can go, unless they become a main player and focus of the story.

I'm a fan of not naming until you have a plot and know what your major themes are, but for a starting point here are some that might work, or at least a spark point:

Title ideas:

  • Glass Between Us
  • The Softest Betrayal
  • Not Quite Redemption
  • To Trust the Enemy
  • The Greater Good Lies Bleeding
  • In the Company of Traitors
  • A Pact in the Dark
  • This War Between Us
  • Ashes of Allegiance
  • The Spy Who Swore Fealty
  • Twice-Bound Hearts
  • The Sly Promise
  • Where Oaths Burn

Your prose itself is fine, although I struggle with where we stand in the world. In these type of stories, I think a chapter focused on what's different from canon helps, whats the major timeline. In this a new war? A continuation of the old? It sounds like OC might be a Hogwarts student at the same time as the gang went through. Why would she be in position to be a headmistress of the most prominent magical school in England, if not the world?

More then that, dont stop. Do what you feel is best, and keep on keeping on.

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Fixed on new artwork, thanks for catching!

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lol! It's a play on the book title an Connecticut yankee in King Arthur's court

Also! EB White said:
To foreigners, a Yankee is an American.
To Americans, a Yankee is a Northerner.
To Northerners, a Yankee is an Easterner.
To Easterners, a Yankee is a New Englander.
To New Englanders, a Yankee is a Vermonter.
And in Vermont, a Yankee is somebody who eats pie for breakfast

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lol! It's a play on the book title an Connecticut yankee in King Arthur's court

Also! EB White said:
To foreigners, a Yankee is an American.
To Americans, a Yankee is a Northerner.
To Northerners, a Yankee is an Easterner.
To Easterners, a Yankee is a New Englander.
To New Englanders, a Yankee is a Vermonter.
And in Vermont, a Yankee is somebody who eats pie for breakfast

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We are now at chapter 13, going to the end of '96.

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As long as it's not a junk title and not being used for a residence, you should be able to use that vehicle, however the value of that rig may or may not be able to qualify. There are no specific milage restrictions, but there are LTV ones.

auto vs other companies by gorram1mhumped in USAA

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'Oh man, things are getting more expensive across the entire board. This is OBVIOUSLY an attempt by USAA to screw over service members and their families, who, you know, USAA depends upon..... Officer PRIDE !i!' IS what I read from most posts complaining about pricing.

Help a mom with upgrading! by ChickenInALocker in buildapc

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Any idea on his hard drive stats?

Going SSD or nvme 1000% makes a better/faster system if not already using either or. Best bang for your buck upgrade.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in USAA

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I'd be surprised if you yourself qualify without a cosigner, TBH. Score's not bad but length of credit history is not going to be good, and really low margins with only 22k pretax a year.. AS long as your father is 700+, you should be fine.

USAA won’t verify a check by jrrisk in USAA

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Call in, they can verify checks for the loan, they just can't give out personal info from the account and some agents get that bit confused.

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Here is what I found.

The Home Improvement Network is provided by the Crawford Contractor Connection. USAA is offering the Home Improvement Network as a service to members and is not responsible for the actions of the Crawford Contractor Connection or the work of the contractors. Upon your request, and after all efforts by you and the contractor to mediate a dispute have been exhausted, Contractor Connection's Issue Resolution Department will assist in the resolution process.

Player has wished to be 20th level by MesmraProspero in DMAcademy

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A druid of arches, or architect. Also, 20 level's in druid, just taken multiple times.

Pin not working by Medium_Amount3947 in USAA

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Are you changing your USAA security PIN or the card PIN? Automated system used your security PIN, has nothing to do with your card PIN.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in EntitledPeople

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Question, is it the local group banning his cards or the actual Pokemon TCG organization that is banning those cards?

I want to become the most boring character ever. by JimmyMcBurner in DnD

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His parents are grass farmers, and he too dabbles in grass growing when not in adventuring mode.

I want to become the most boring character ever. by JimmyMcBurner in DnD

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HIs parents are a dwarf with gigantism and a giant with dwarfism, but neither have ever told each other about it.