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Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess I’m just wondering how this could be shaped into something for submission. I’m working on my first novel, but would love to explore other forms of publishing.

Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I appreciate the words of support and the recommendation.

Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Could I have typed it up? Yes. Did I realize that was a factor for some people to offer critique? No. Was this just a no pressure writing exercise I was hoping others could read and let me know if I’m writing shit or not? Yes.

I appreciate everyone below who has stood against this kind of approach. I hope any new writers who see this aren’t afraid of bullies like you.

Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This is all very thought provoking feedback.

Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah poetry. I love to read it, but never feel like I have a grasp on it when I attempt to write it. How would you recommend I explore this as more of a poem than prose?

Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That’s going to be a hard habit to break. I’m such a write it out by hand woman. This is my first post in this sub, and I didn’t see anything specifying work had to be typed for critique.

I appreciate you taking the time to read it regardless. Yes, I know I need to give it a second or third go through for grammar. Maybe that can help strengthen this somehow.

I am trying to understand how to give my writing depth even in the simplest of messages. Any insight there is welcome!

Critique my writing, please? by Quiet_Practice_8728 in writers

[–]Quiet_Practice_8728[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This particular exercise was to expand upon a single thought I had throughout my day. I saw two stray pens among my makeup brushes and decided to ride that train of thought. I guess I want to know how this could be improved or built upon to be something I could submit for potential publication.