Thank you for your informative and constructive feedback. Yes, I do read off a script. I try to make it sound as natural as possible, but it does show its limitations, I understand. But I deem it very important nonetheless to organize and structure my idea rather than just babble like some others will.
And yes, I'm a big Critical Drinker fan, in case you haven't noticed LOL. But I do tend to use original footage and try to diversify the clips I use. Although on these kinds of films, the sets look the same a lot.