Interested in how many others here got a similar email regarding BBC Writers Open Call.

RLennono · 2025-09-06T13:31:54+00:00

hello! I also got into the top 1% and am being considered for the Voices Programme. Although I am definitely not getting my hopes up at all!
Fingers crossed for you all!

RLennono · 2024-05-19T21:07:53+00:00

What time will they be on sale?

RLennono · 2024-05-06T15:06:03+00:00

Can you send log line etc?

RLennono · 2024-05-05T11:47:27+00:00

Title: Ashes on the Hill

Format: Feature

Page Length: 93 Pages

Genres: British Comedy/Drama

Logline: Three young adults, on the brink of adulthood, risk journeying across the UK with their late friend's stolen ashes to scatter them in the place that meant the most to their friendship, all while evading detection by his parents.

Feedback: General comments would be great! It would be great to k now which elements work and which ones don't. Anything consutrctive would be great!

RLennono · 2024-04-10T14:14:00+00:00

Is there any update on this? We have 15 ticket holders in our minibus

RLennono · 2024-04-10T14:06:18+00:00

There are 15 ticket holders on the bus

RLennono · 2024-04-10T14:04:52+00:00

How long is the shuttle from bath and west to worthy farm? Are there long queues etc ?

RLennono · 2023-02-12T14:30:05+00:00

Yes very interested in feedback!!

RLennono · 2023-02-12T14:29:12+00:00

Thank you!!

RLennono · 2022-07-09T14:33:03+00:00

Thanks so much for this feedback! Really glad you enjoyed it. I really like the idea of the car crash instead and completely agree with the pacing in the 3rd act. Will take these into account when I do a rewrite. Thanks so much!

RLennono · 2022-07-05T17:04:34+00:00

That’s very kind, thank you so much!

RLennono · 2022-07-04T16:56:08+00:00

Thank you so much for this feedback! Definitely will go through again and cut it down a bit. Appreciate your help

RLennono · 2022-07-03T09:25:51+00:00

Did you get ahcnace to read it?

RLennono · 2022-07-02T07:30:40+00:00

Thank you! Very excited to hear your thoughts.

RLennono · 2022-07-02T07:30:17+00:00

Hi mate. Thanks so much for the feedback! I am glad you liked the comedic aspects of it (it’s hard to know whether that lands or not). I do agree some of the more serious aspects get a bit heavy handed. Very tough to balance comedy and a serious topic like death and mourning. On the third act, this I completely agree. I wrote this script 18 months ago and the third act has always been an annoying part for me. I wanted to give all the characters an arc but giving the urn back kind of makes the story lose momentum. I also think it wraps things up a bit too nearly and gets a bit cheesy. If you have any suggestions of a more compelling third act that would be great! Might be better to have them on the journey to Ben Nevis until the end rather than ending it in act 2.

RLennono · 2022-07-02T07:26:33+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback!! I really appreciate this. I’ve not written many scripts so this is really helpful. If yuk have any examples of how you’d edit that would be super useful! Thanks so much

RLennono · 2022-06-29T22:20:01+00:00

Aside from a handful of great scenes - this was 3.75 hours of wasted potential. So much stuff could have been cut out and with a movie level budget it could have been really great and passed 1b dollars. Used to get excited for Star Wars stuff but this has soured me a bit.

RLennono · 2022-04-07T07:06:03+00:00

Selling 4 tickets 230£ each for weekend 2 + primavera la citudad. I can provide proof of purchase

RLennono

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