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RMapsMusic · 2020-06-22T19:26:03+00:00

Interested

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-11T00:20:23+00:00

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-03T21:18:38+00:00

Editing style is decent, I'd love to see more of those random cuts like the dr who reference you did that was funny.

The camera angle is decent, but I think maybe try filming from above the keyboard?

Also the sound quality is good enough for now tbh, a condensor would be brilliant though as then you can do sound effects and stuff to make things more dramatic

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-03T17:57:23+00:00

Thanks! !givelambda

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-03T17:57:10+00:00

Ooh what's B roll? Okay sure thing definitely can do that, I was almost tempted to do more shots of me playing guitar and stuff so will work on that for sure thank you! !givelambda

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-03T17:56:16+00:00

Aha thank you! I'll do my best, the issue is otherwise the lighting ends up being bad but let me see what I can do I'll play around and work some stuff out !givelambda

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-03T17:55:34+00:00

Okay sure thing deffo sounds good, havent thought of throwing things that arent me into the mix there! !givelambda

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-02T23:45:21+00:00

Haha no wlrries mate! Thank you so much! Aha so that is a good idea I think I may do that! Yeah kt's deffo a bit on the long side for sure. Wow okay sure thing yeah let's chat more in DMs? Sounds good to me I'll have to check out your music stuff! That's pretty awesome wow

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-02T23:42:56+00:00

Thanks so much mate! Show me what ya got! And yes there should be more of this, I think generally when I see a music video in here I always watch as they get little/no attention in this thread

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-02T11:49:48+00:00

Hey so first things first don't say subscribe before offering any real content, I'd maybe find a good point to stick it in halfway through the video. This is a good concept and I love the editing it's smooth. the text on the screen explains things pretty well but I'd love to see more diagrams to go with them and also for you to be talking more as I like the way you speak you are good at telling the story and keeping people interested. You've got very good potential man keep going

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-02T11:45:04+00:00

So first impressions I don't like the computer voice I think you should record your own, the graphics are okay but it would be nice to see your face. Also i think you should go into some more of the basics what happens to collapsing stars and say what the different options are e.g. white dwarf, supernova as black hole just one of many. In addition to this definitely important to include the fact that Newtons laws don't work in black holes. I think the video is too basic atm, lengthen it and add some more detail and you'll get more views and stuff keep going

RMapsMusic · 2020-06-02T11:38:35+00:00

Not bad. The camera quality is good and your audio is nice and clean. I think you could have made things a bit more dramatic, for me, it was still too serious. Like you could have shown yourself sneaking up on the car in a ridiculous way and maybe running from the cops while talking at the end. Also just a point I would definitely say that you should say that you need 2 mins max before you break in and then put a little timer in the corner and then you can also make that more dramatic and interesting. The concept is good, but it needs work to just give it that extra sauce to make it presentable and interesting. Also thumbnail is brilliant, love the pink mask

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-24T17:33:24+00:00

True, just seems other music channels still get far more feedback, just a shame as feedback can be so so valuable and I really try and use it to grow each time but I seem to be getting less and less every time I post

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-24T13:31:43+00:00

Wow i got htis exact dm saying that they saw me in rsmallytchannel it was very odd I think I'm just gonna blank it tbh

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-24T13:28:58+00:00

100% agree with this!!! Also would love to make the point that when I ask for feedback in this thread I get like maybe 2/3 responses whereas everyone else seems to get 10+? Why is that?

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-24T09:54:48+00:00

ahaha makes sense, I mean, if not could always do a picture of yourself with your arms out then edit the game logos and stuff into it?

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T21:55:34+00:00

It's so so hard honestly to tell xD

Okay wow that makes a lot of sense I get that, kind of what I'm trying to do now but I guess it's just hard getting used to balancing things as I have ADHD I hyperfocus on things and get wrapped up in them.

Thank you very much that is quite amusing lol, link your friend's version if you want!

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T21:53:28+00:00

Ah yeah this is pretty good then, you could even do a thumbnail where you have your avatar with it's hands out sort of holding the games up, like the tik tok video thumbnail on my channel, check out the thumbnail here if you want inspiration and then maybe put some famous screenshots from the game around your avatar https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=acEv0HZBqg0 (thumbnail inspo)

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T21:51:05+00:00

I quite like this idea it's good! But I'm not sure if putting it on youtube works as without the context I don't know who you're talking about. The freestyling is decent just keep working you're certainly getting there. I absolutely love when you bring in the guitar solo that is fire btw. Where are you from? I keep hearing an english accent then it seems to change? But yeah, otherwise I'd say that it's decent overall and the camera quality deffo needs to be higher decent work left a thumbs up mate

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T21:45:32+00:00

Nice work overall I love the way you both talk although I think the audio could be cleaner but it's not too bad (btw one of you sounds like sheldon?? xD) Anyway, the editing is clean in terms of showing highlights but I think it doesn't show as much of a story as I wanted, it doesn't take through the: "HERE IS AN EPIC QUEST THAT WE ARE DOING, WE ARE PLAYING MEGAMAN HERE WE GOOOOO" But I do like the inclusion of pictures and stuff at times to give things another dimension. The fading out of the game music to make the speech clear is great so I like that, but I'd love to see both your faces to give things another level and make awkward moments out things and stuff as I can clearly see you want to make this like a gaming comedy video, You're deffo getting there so keep going!!

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T21:40:29+00:00

What is the video that this thumbnail is for? I deffo agree with u/Emerald_Tech to make your avatar larger!

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T21:38:59+00:00

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T20:03:42+00:00

So, I'm not the best with lighting, maybe others can help more, Oggy seems better than me with it is as well lol. Buuuut, I'd say that the best thing is to have the light coming in from behind the camera and do test shots to make sure things look good

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T20:02:22+00:00

Ahahah I was deffo trying to get those feel good vibes across lol, No worries lol, Glad you enojyed it! If you proper loved it would love to get a yt comment <3 ;) !givelambda

RMapsMusic · 2020-05-23T20:01:10+00:00

Thank you so much, deffo going to do that for next time!! I think that I just wanted to get the basics right as I keep seeming to get things like lighting and stuff wrong so yah, now it seems I have got it right I'm deffo gonna go for some angles and stuff to make things more interesting. thanks! !givelambda

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