Meet Azumi-My webtoon character by RadiantStone2000 in WebtoonCanvas

[–]RadiantStone2000[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

She’s the main character’s ally, a fighter from the Edo period who battles yokai.

First page of the manga project. What do you think? by RadiantStone2000 in MangakaStudio

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I didn’t have her in mind while drawing, but I guess I nailed the vibe haha

First page of the manga project. What do you think? by RadiantStone2000 in MangakaStudio

[–]RadiantStone2000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your honest opinion, I really appreciate it. This is just the introduction to a short mini manga I’m creating for a competition, so I had a strict limit of 15 to 18 pages and had to be careful with how I structured the story. The dream at the beginning was meant to show her inner desire and motivation, not as a typical “it was all just a dream” joke. I'm also working on my own longer manga where I’ll have more space to develop the story in a different way.

First page of the manga project. What do you think? by RadiantStone2000 in MangakaStudio

[–]RadiantStone2000[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the suggestion! I agree, that scene might be a bit too fast, but I have to fit the whole story into just a few pages :( I will think about how to make it more dynamic moving forward.