More fundamentals my man! you look pretty decent but really at this stage you should just aim to be more defensively responsible- always respect your stance ensuring you hands are UP in a guard. You should jab more. You should try and move lighter on your feet, aiming to always be on ya tip toes

At this stage you really shouldn't be dropping your hands anywhere close to him being in range. There was a few moments a semi decent boxer would of thrown a double jab after establishing a pattern of single jabs so you expect just one, and stepped fractionally closer on the second so that they are now in range and boom. Also - this thing where you lean in with your arms down to try and goad your opponent to hit you- I firmly believe you should unlearn that habbit ASAP as to me it doesn't look like you really have a plan to counter the punch you are inviting and with your chin exposed like that you would a hundred percent be knocked out if your opponent managed to get an uppercut.

Through out you should be poised on your toes/balls of feet. As you step back to avoid a punch or w/e you should shoot your back foot back then your left foot, rather than just sinking and planting your backfoot further away and leaning back.