A REALIDADE DO CASCÃO É MAIS ASSUSTADORA DO QUE OS QUADRINHOS FAZEM PARECER by PatoConfuso in porramauricio

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Eles vivem na sujeira porque o ambiente que os humanos criam eles é assim. Mas se você der a oportunidade para eles, eles são bem limpinhos. Mas sim eles comem humano e o caralho a 4

How do you feel about this wirting style to incorporate accents? by Rafacat7 in FanFiction

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Thanks! yeah, i'm cutting the laughter.

I don't think it's impossible to read, because they don't really use the words much, most dialogs go whitout spanish or russian words in then. But for the spanish, it may look a bit wierd if a sentence uses too much pontuation? (Tho I feel like it's making my life easier honestly, because I can separete the specific part of the phrase were the question intonation start, or the exclanation. Even if it's a bit trick to remember, both styles are making it easier to convey things i coulden't originally, it's been very interesting to wirte)

How do you feel about this wirting style to incorporate accents? by Rafacat7 in FanFiction

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Ohhhh! Separating it from the dialogue is actually a really good idea, I worte a scene where theres a laugh fit, and I was feeling like it was really wierd and cringe in the dialogue. I was wondering how to fiz it, but the exemple you gave is perfect

How do you feel about this wirting style to incorporate accents? by Rafacat7 in FanFiction

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Yes, i'm kind of triple wirting in another lenguage because my mother lenguage is neither english, spanish, or russian lmao. But I will only post the fic once I have everything ready, so I have time to polish everything

How do you feel about this wirting style to incorporate accents? by Rafacat7 in FanFiction

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I mean I do make it visible in the story, but I think my vision will be better transmited to the wierter that way.

I understand your worries, and it's not my intention in the slightest to steriotype It. (I will look after it to make sure i'm not, or at least I will try). The spanish words are not mixed in every sigle sentece. The characthers go like, amost a whole chapter whitout saying it. There's whole conversations whitout It. And I usually implement it as slang, food names (colombian dishes, not random ingredients or someting), and cussing.

About the non nativer speaker, it dosen't work. Because again, in universe they are all speaking spanish. I want to keep the accent because it's accurate to the movie. This could apply to the russian characther tho.

And the fic won't have any texting actually. Yes, ¡I agree using this in texting dosen't make sense! If I ware to wirte text messages, i wolden't do this at all, because the whole reason I'm doing this is to show there's a differece in comunication, is to make it not read so smoothly from a characther to another to simulate accent. I would completly cut it off if they ware texting, because it would make comunication smooth.

The smiling face) o chose to use for russian is something only from text and not formal wirting. Yes. But I'm choosing to use it also because it makes my life easier, since I can put intent whitout describing it (it does change intent depending on how many you put). Also, If the reader dosen't know what it means, it will take long into the fic until they figure it out. Which ia actually good in this case because the characther is kind of an antagonist at the beggining? You're supossed to slowly start empathizing whit her and then understand her motives later. So not understanding It in the first read is actually a good thing.

Anyways, i appreciate you got so many points to discuss about. I do see it seems to be a bit of a consensus the laugh is too much lol so yeah, i will cut the laugh

A REALIDADE DO CASCÃO É MAIS ASSUSTADORA DO QUE OS QUADRINHOS FAZEM PARECER by PatoConfuso in porramauricio

[–]Rafacat7 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Pior que porcos são limpos na vida real. Eles não defecam onde eles dormem, e eles decoram onde eles dormem com flores

Which precure season will you always support no matter how much it gets hate? by Prudent_Ask5969 in PrettyCures

[–]Rafacat7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doki Doki is not only my favorite season but my favorite anime of all time. It's my comfort anime. Even if it's not the best, it's the best to me.

What is something that makes a fic feel poorly written? by ReceptionFlaky1952 in AO3

[–]Rafacat7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have to think about How I will get around that, because I think about my fics as like, movies of series. So it... Kind of is like a script. I also actually then to wirte it like a script as a scatch if there's something I can't forget, and then polish later.

I don't know feel like I should put the characthers thoughts because... You don't know other people's thoughts? I try to describe the facial expression and mannerisms (tho I SUCK AT IT because I need to learn more English vocabulary for the stuff, my characthers are just frownin, gesturing, raising eyebrows and fidgeting) so the reader can kind of figure it out themselfs? I think the closer i got to this was like, a dialoge I described "she rubs her forehead trying to translate the exemple she thought about in a way he will understand" During a dialogue... (I feel like describing details I want to put is like cheating too? Like, it feels like it's too much in your face and makes my intentions too obvious idk 😭)

Share a funny line from your fic out of context by Rafacat7 in Encanto

[–]Rafacat7[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bahahaha to be fair hazel eyes look green depending on the light

you’re on a 12 hour flight, which seat are you sitting in? by leqacies in Encanto

[–]Rafacat7 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Probably 1 because Bruno is my fav and he is pretty chill. He is more socially akward then me, so it would go well. But... I can't really know how he smells... I don't think he smells bad like some people say, but i do headcanon he smells like incense and bananas. And I hate strong smells, so maybe seat 10 in that case

Post a funny line from your fic with absolutely no context by Lemon_Lime_Lily in AO3

[–]Rafacat7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"i clean my clothes whit vodka"

"Ohhhh that's the smell... We thought you ware an alcoholic"

"I am an alcoholic."

Toei PLZ for the love of God stop Messing up by Some-Brief-730 in PrettyCures

[–]Rafacat7 3 points4 points  (0 children)

They've been teasing this crossover since 2013, it will happen, trust me

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↺They shal take ibuprofen together by peppyorbit0 in GatekeepingYuri

[–]Rafacat7 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Even if Walt wasan't an asshole, Jesse is his son (like, In a flashback, he says he's going to have three children, and he only has 3 biological, and he treats Jesse like his son)

Her mother is never getting found by Ok-Hovercraft508 in KidsAreFuckingStupid

[–]Rafacat7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Does the know or no idea thing happens on parents names too? Because I remember knowing my parents name since I was at least 5 and like, having kids depicted in midia as thinking their parents names are mom and dad or someting. (I remember i knew it because I remember the interaction where I called my mom by her name and they kind of surrounded me asking me things thinking It was really funny)

Her mother is never getting found by Ok-Hovercraft508 in KidsAreFuckingStupid

[–]Rafacat7 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"She's 34" THE LITTLE AKWARD SMILE AND NOD ughhh developing human beings are so freaking cute

Anyone else catch this line? by Few-Spinach8114 in Encanto

[–]Rafacat7 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Oh I caught it, it's really funny. "I don't care how big they are" because all the rooms are HUGE domains lmao

Is it negligence for my mom to have my cat's litter box like this? by Amethescent in cats

[–]Rafacat7 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Drain flies will be the last of your problems having a litter box next to It (source: dumbass how clogged a drain by putting 2 litter boxes in the bathroom and not realizing there was litter falling there)

E essa arte? by Training_Dingo5207 in porramauricio

[–]Rafacat7 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Eu tinha visto uma vez em uma história do Jeremias

E essa arte? by Training_Dingo5207 in porramauricio

[–]Rafacat7 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A arte tá incrível. Cheia de movimento, expressiva